Reviews for Impromptu Partners
emmabrady chapter 1 . 5/17
I hope you add more to this.. it could be interesting were you take it...
AngelDragon1976 chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
Wow, this was so cute that you should actually continue this story!
Lonelywicked chapter 1 . 3/15/2019
In the right circumstances I can totally see Lucius seducing Hermione.
CuriousElfQueen chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
The weather! Haha - She’s talking about the weather! And Lucius is amused. I love it when he’s subtly amused.
Their stilted conversation is cracking me up.
WHENT THE FOOD IS SERVED! AH!
Lucius' frozen fork is priceless.
and I bet anything that he was doing a countdown in his head for her to turn around there at the end.
Love a bit of Lumione. This was absolutely delightful.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
This seems more like a first chapter than anything. Chapter 2 would be "later that night" which would delve into each character's recent personal history as they each did their usual evening activities; Chapter 3 would be "a day in the life" with possibly a small passage of time during which Lucius would daringly/smirkingly/schemingly send Hermione an invitation to share lunch again at a different "high fallutin'" restaurant and Hermione would of course spend a bit of time pondering the wisdom, etc...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2017
...Lucius held himself proudly aloof as he surreptitiously watched Ms. Granger walk away, his eyes tracking her every movement. No one observing the scene as it played out would have guessed Lord Malfoy's intentions toward the future Lady Malfoy.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
good beginning. Such a pity that's all we are going to see. Care to help us see more?
Happy chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
Whew! Hot! Great story, and only T-rated. Wonderful!
2AM chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
Ah, this is one of my favorite ships, and I really like what you did with the two of them here.
Alytiger chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
I love this! This is so cute :3
Montara chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
Oh, no, just one chapter?! This is such a good start for a lengthy story! I loved it!
WinterOrion chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
Oooooh I wish this continued so I could see more of their interactions. Well done!
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
Loved this!
SilverCBurr chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
I don't normally read Lumione, but when I have, save for a few exceptions, I find the development of the attraction a bit unrealistic. Though I cannot imagine offering a taste of food to someone I was not at least a close friend with, I found this quite believable and it definitely had me wanting more. I don't suppose you could be prevailed upon (or flattered sufficiently into - you wonderfully amazing addicting author) writing a second course to this deliciousness? I would love to see how you would develop this romance from this starting point.
laraquick chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
What an intriguing meeting. :)
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