D'awww...cute story!

It was ok. Very hard to read. You did not use "" which made it hard to undrstand who was talking.

No reply. *shoots bright pink fireball into the sky, the same colored glitter falls down, and I fly up to my ledge taking a little dragon nap while muttering something angrily for not reason.*

Awwwwww your story was so sweet and fluffy, and you had a good narration of Hiccup and Toothless's tale at the beginning.