Reviews for Higgs Boson
ITZnina chapter 10 . 10/20/2018
Aww so cute
noorulain chapter 10 . 5/29/2018
great story
evie chapter 2 . 8/24/2017
amazing
melynita chapter 10 . 7/7/2013
awwwww i loved it!
yodumbledorewheresmyletter chapter 10 . 6/12/2013
Aww! Great chapter, a wee bit short but still perfect :D Please update!
Puidwen chapter 10 . 5/23/2013
Not one of my fav pairings but still i like the fic
Moon-Shining-Wolf chapter 10 . 4/14/2013
Aw love this story it was so cute to read.
I love how Hermione saved him without knowing she did.
Namna-dono chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
Hello! I'm here to judge this fic for the Alphabet Soup Challenge!

It's very interesting to read a ship that isn't your own, it gives a new perspective. I like this relationship between Cedric and Hermione that you've got going on here :)

Well done and good luck!
elemout chapter 10 . 3/3/2013
The only thing I might suggest is that a small clue be inserted in one of the earlier chapters about the badge being made of some Muggle substance that she practices transfiguring (like titanium) so it makes sense that it protects him (and maybe he or she enlarges it and he wears it like a boon or crest type thing for his lady).
I really enjoyed how this series ends and makes me ship Cedmione (whom I never though of as a couple before).
elemout chapter 9 . 3/3/2013
I liked Cedric's perspective on how Hufflepuff is often glossed over and how Slytherins and Gryyfindors are always hogging the glory or infamy. It was a nice way to show why the Goblet might have chosen him, he wanted to prove something.
elemout chapter 8 . 3/3/2013
"They've been making moon eyes at each other for months." - Hilarious and yes, this should have been obvious to the whole school. I love this view of the second task, esp. with poor Krum having to rescue Ron.
I didn't quite get the title but I may be missing something.
elemout chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
I love how you fit this in within canon, it's entirely plausible and feels natural. I'm not a Ron fan and this makes it clear why many others (positive, intelligent, and kind) individuals would have been a better fit for her.
elemout chapter 6 . 3/3/2013
This was also very sweet and showed the progression of their relationship without unnecessary telling. I especially loved, ""Not quite," she answered contrarily." It's so much in her character.
elemout chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
I loved the " massive flock of terrorist birds." phrase, it was perfect to describe Hermione's little flying army. I also liked how Hermione was relating her knowledge to Cedric here so they balance each other out.
elemout chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
I love the name Lampshade, it's very funny. I know there is a word count but that big paragraph in the middle may work better if split up a little with some action\movement.
Also, if Hermione had done that (changed the goal to aiding mistreating elves) things would have gone so much better.
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