| Reviews for Blood Instinct |
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| zoldyckxtamara chapter 16 . 11/11/2014 Hey hey, great story! This is my second time reading it. I just wanted to let you know that the word you were looking for was "etiquette". Oh, also, just a little helpful criticism, when describing Fionna, it's better to say "adventurer" instead of girl or whatever. I noticed you write "adventurous", but that is more of a personality trait, rather than a title. I don't know how to end this without coming across rude, so I'll just end with- BRAVO! |
 Bunny hat chapter 1 . 5/4/2014 Aaaaawwwww so cute like Fis bunny hat |
| Vjs7 chapter 30 . 3/25/2014 I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY! Maybe you could do a sequel? |
| Vjs7 chapter 23 . 3/24/2014 Love the story! |
| Flopi216 chapter 30 . 3/5/2014 I love your fic, was beautifull |
| BrilliantPurple chapter 30 . 3/3/2014 Omg! I loved this fanfic soo much 0.0 so sad it's over, ur an awesome writer! Keep up the good work _ |
| TheBoyWhoLived190 chapter 30 . 2/8/2014 NOOOOO it can't be over! I loved it so much you are SUCH an amazing writer! I would read it like 1000 more times, heck, I would read it over and over again until I DIED if I could! I mean that was just..., WOW. BREATHTAKING, SPECTACULAR, AMAZING, GLORIOUS, BRILLIANT, WONDERFUL... T_T. IT WAS SO DARN AMAZING! |
| TheBoyWhoLived190 chapter 24 . 2/8/2014 AAAAHHHHH! WHAT! |
| TheBoyWhoLived190 chapter 19 . 2/7/2014 ...geez marshal your sort of a perv. |
| Ashe Jayfeather chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Cool beans :) |
| NicoleStark chapter 30 . 8/20/2013 Mathmatical |
| The Loved And Unloved chapter 3 . 8/19/2013 Lol Honors? AP? I feel your pain. Well kind of sorta xD (I know you posted this awhile ago lol) This was awesome! I love the stars, I like a lot of weird things like that xD I thought this was going to be a cute, fluffy chapter. NOPE! Someone is in danger!? :O Off to the next chapter! -Amber - Aka The Loved And Unloved |
| The Loved And Unloved chapter 2 . 8/19/2013 These chapters are shorter than I anticipated. Nothing wrong with that though c; Lol I like how them two had a kissing frenzy in chapter two and in my story we're over 35,000 words in and the most they've done is cuddle xD I liked that scene, it was sweet. Your wording could use improvement. Like with Vocabulary. Other than that this was wonderful! -Amber - Aka The Loved And Unloved |
| The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 Hello pal. Did ya think I was gonna read this? Probably not...maybe you were hoping? I dunno xD Anyways, this was an awesome start! Yes I realize that you finished this story already but oh well. Amber's gonna read it anyways! Which is weird, I don't normally read out-dated or completed stories, but I decided to :) I dunno when I'll finish reading this entire thing. I'ma slow reader and I don't have a whole lot of time. But you already knew that. Well, I'm off to the next chapter :3 -Amber - Aka The Loved And Unloved |
