I love it! Absolutely well written.

*giggles at the cute kids*
All in a good night's work, eh boys? Creeps down for the count, minimal blood, and happy grateful kids some of whom want to learn to be as cool as their rescuers. XD

This was awesome. I loved the part where the little girl said she was gonna marry Don

My favorite part was when Katie declared her intent to marry Donatello when she grows up. Oh my goodness, that's just too cute! XD

Damn, those kids are cute! Well executed, as always.

Very nice, very nice, wonderful job

I can see this turn into an episode. Totally. Nice.

Oh my gosh, love love LOVE! :D This was AWESOME! The dynamic between the brothers was perfect - Love how they immediately looked to Leo to come up with the plan, and Don's knowledge of how to execute it was fantastic. You handled Mikey so well - he KNOWS how to focus and be a ninja. The scene with the kids at the end was adorable. Loved seeing Raph and Mike show off for the boys. And I actually made a *squee* sound when Katie told Don she was going to marry him - SO cute, and it's exactly the sort of thing a little girl would say! Well done! Thanks for sharing this!

Yep, that duffel bag might seem annoying at times, but it has many uses. Carrying Don's supplies and medical supplies in it. Can always rely on good ol' Donny to come prepared!

This was really sweet. I was really expecting something different, but this was better. I loved how much Donnie brought out from his bag of tricks. Leo's methodical plan, Mikey and Raph's little show for the kids - all great little touches that really brought this story together.

"I'm going to marry you" - perhaps the cutest scene I've ever read in a TMNT fic, including the chibi fics I've read.

The ending scene was also really touching, but I like that Don kept the bag, anyway. At least his brothers understand.

Great job!

awww that was wonderful and awesome and that line, "i'm gonna marry you." was SOOOO CUTE