| Reviews for Payback |
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   LizzyBear24 chapter 1 . 8/1/2019 Sheesh, that was f*cking erotic! Awesome writing style and amazing little story :) |
| masterlysheep chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 Gaara sounded more like Kiba than himself but I still had a fun time reading this. Everytime Gaara curse I scream. He his the last character I think would have a dirty mount. I laugh so hard. |
| pizzansushi chapter 1 . 8/16/2017 As always you serve it hot and delicious! I am a fan of your writing. Have been for a long time. Finally got an account. I hope you find more inspiration soon. Please update and write us more stories. I like how your scenes are just long enough to sink in, but you don't use too many frilly descriptors that distract. You put us in the story and keep us there. |
| ddeiSmile chapter 1 . 7/29/2016 I do like a lot of couples with Hinata (actually just Nejihina, sasuhina and maybe naruhina, just in the anime, not for reading), but, NONE WILL EVER BE LIKE GAAHINA. Jesus, this was so good, even if it was an AU with slight OOC, it was just perfect. Thank you so much for publishing something this good in the gaahina tag. |
| satomika chapter 1 . 4/9/2016 Nyahaha Nice! Payback's gonna be fun! :D And yeah, in Gaara's words, truly, that was fucking hot! :3 |
| breaker99 chapter 1 . 12/27/2015 That was sexy! |
| I lov Hinata chapter 1 . 12/16/2015 Sequel please, pretty please with sprinkles on top! |
| Princess mAlice chapter 1 . 9/8/2015 Oh my gosh write a sequel about Hiinata giving him a BJ while he's on the phone! |
| xo chapter 1 . 8/20/2015 THAT WAS REALLY GOOOOOD. I WANNA READ MORE MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE.. IT'S INCREDIBLE |
| Squinttern chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 This is GREAT! I love your portrayal of Garra, and top-notch dirty talk :) |
| Grim Peasant chapter 1 . 7/1/2015 sweet~ |
| crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 11/14/2014 Haha, that was very steamy and Gaara's so naughty to interuppt his wife in the middle of an important call. xD |
| Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 Holy fuck that was bloody hot! I'm just a little disappointed that he didn't take her while she was on the phone. Let her scream and make a squeaking excuse. God! That was soo hot and heavy! |
| Hliran chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 OMFG YES! :))) revenge is sweet XDDD! I enjoyed this very much! |
| Honeyee chapter 1 . 7/1/2014 OMG that was hot! I hope there's a part 2 to this. haha |
