I like how Sophie was stronger and came to rescue her friends and brother.

I like how you changed it up at the end of this chapter by adding something new, the possessed Guardians taking away everyone but Sophie. It really adds to the story’s tension.

I liked how this battle was more interesting than the old one.

I like the difference in how they find out what’s going on as opposed to the old version.

I like how the Guardians came after the apprentices immediately. It added more tension to the story.

Nice ending.

Nice emotion in this chapter.

Interesting chapter, though it kind of defeats the apprentices’ success they worked so hard for.

I like how North’s battle didn’t seem as easy to win as some of the other ones.

I like the change in Tooth and her palace, though there are again some tense errors in this chapter.

Interesting, though sometimes the tense changed.

Interesting, and cool clothes, though hard to picture some of the fights.

Interesting.

Interesting concept with the Guardians’ apprentices!

This is great! I really like that Sophie kept her 2 year old mentality during this. Just because her body ages doesn't mean her mind does. I can't wait to read what happens next! If you would like my opinion about something, I would say that Sandy should be the last to wake up. He's by far the most powerful out of all of them. That's just my opinion though. Either way, I'm sure that it'll be good.