Well, I hope to see more of this someday.

Take your time, but get to the awesomeness! :D

Thanks for your writing!

Honestly I will read almost any ace story out there. Revise to your hearts content cause that just means I can continue reading! I love almost all stories I read. (And honestly I don’t ever comment on stories cause I’m not good at commenting.) but I’ll leave this comment for you. I love the story and would love to see how you want it portrayed. :)

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being a writer is hard. But you shouldn't make excuses. You should just write your stories. Don't post them until they are complete lol. It makes it more easy to focus on the story you yourself enjoy writing and reading. Instead of feeling obligated to continue it. That way if you stop half way feeling like this story is a disappointment to you. You wont disappoint the readers by going years without posting... lol I did the same thing to haha. But now I write the stories and save them to my documents. If I finish the story and feel like its a success then I post it chapter by chapter. Keeps myself and my readers happy. I do really like the story so far. If you happen to want to finish it that's a plus. If not. That's fine to. Just be a writer. Writers block, brakes, plot changes, errors, Between you the writer and your readers, differences in opinions on certain aspects of your stories are a given. This all comes with the territory of being a writer. Other writers will get that with out you say it. Haha. If you get reviews that complain about you taking to long. Or how much you suck for not finishing it. It is because they themselves are just readers and not writers. You can not please everyone. But the real question is can you make yourself happy with each chapter? If so its the best you could have done. Feel proud you wrote as much as you have for this story. Its more than some of the readers have written. Hahaha. My advice though is if you will not use this account anymore. You should put, abandoned, in the description. So people who don't want to read an unfinished story can avoid it. While those who just simply like to read, will. I am the latter of the last statement. Haha. Thanks for the fun reading and time you put into this story. Even unfinished it is really good. :)

Ay my dude, take the story where ever you wanna take it, I'll be super happy to keep reading either way! Whatever you think would be best for the story, and you certainly won't lose me as a reader

Hey I am okay with you redoing this story, although if you plan on changing it radically i would suggest reposing it as a different story. Though I did love that Ace was being stupid and jumped out the tree, and his interaction with Sabo after that. Life changes and sometimes we need breathers, its okay to do things differently. Was this support to take place right before Luffy gets taken to the bandits by Garp? I would be willing to be a sounding board for you, just pm me whenever you are stuck, I may not reply immediatly but I do reply within 24 hours. Good luck.

I'd love to continue reading your stories

Hello,

I'm happy that this story is not abandoned. When you rewrite it, will you change the chapters or will you repost it completely? I think I'm not the only one that will ask you that but I'd like to see (read) where you're going with this story.

Good luck to you and I hope to read your story soon.

Noeru67

PS : If you want a beta reader, I'm willing to help you out but be warned that I've yet to beta read a story.

Oh hey! It's good to hear you're doing better! I personally wouldn't mind reading a re-write, will you be posting it on your other account?

Okay. Thanks for clarifying some questions. I would love to read a new version of this fic,if you ever decide to rewrite this one. But honestly, this one is quite a unique fic. I'm not bothered about how dark this fic you think you've wrote. There is only a bit of dark in this story as to how Ace cope with his time travelling. Trust me there are thousands of fic in this site that has more disturbing and dark quality than what you've made.

Anyways, good luck if you can write another one that will make you finally finish a story? Looking forward for your revamping of this fic,because I love the plot/story just not the idea of this being completely abandon.

Ja ne

Is Garp heading to Luffy to bring him to the bandits? Hope you haven't given up on this story, it has potential.

Hi! I like you're story and the premise and I especially love Ace and Sabo, because they're both awesome and two of my favorite characters (though I have a long list of favorite characters from One Piece!). The idea of Ace reliving his childhood is an interesting one, and I can't wait to see where you go with it! Is Luffy coming in soon? I really want to see that, so I suppose I'll just have to keep reading and find out!

Anyway, I have a quick question. Why do you put exclamation points after some words in the middle of a sentence in parentheses? Is it to indicate emphasis on the word? If so, why not italicize it? Is it for another purpose? Just wondering!

Thanks! I'll go back to reading now!

Please update this story soon.

Hmm am sorry for pointing this out but there are some spelling mistakes in this chapter but am not sure about other chapters.

Please update this amazing story and thank you for making this story.