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Jake actually barely knew anything about his Chinese culture in the show. Seriously, he didn't even know what Gong Hay Fat Choy meant. Why'd you make him do the kou tou? He never went to Chinese school, how would he know about that.

This is amazing. The plot development is very well done. Not rushed and building up slowly, the way it's supposed to be. Characters are also portrayed very nicely. They still retain their personalities despite the changes of two years. Also, the way you make things so suspensful and wanting more is one of the best parts.

I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the good work!

Hm, interesting :) I can already see that drama is near us :D! I'm really intrigued by this story :D! The way you add such details and descriptions to the character's emotions is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! .! Damn, I love how you added some unexpectedness in this story :D! Like the fact that Rose is with Brad :o! I seriously didn't expected, nor the the fact that Spud punched Jake like DANG! I didn't see that coming xD! Haha! I know I shouldn't find that funny but I seriously jumped in surprise when I read that part :D! So kudos for the surprise ;)

And I'm glad that you added some slang tone to Trixie's words. I mean, you kept her in character which is hard to find in this fanfiction archive these days :/ Like I dunno, I keep finding stories where Trixie doesn't use her usual slangs nor her southern accent and it kinda bugs me :/ But anyway, I'm super-duper glad that you made her southern accent present in her dialogues :D!

And I love how you made Jake fall slowly for Jasmine :D! I'm just happy that you made a fresh original pairing with the two. It's hard to find pairings with Rose and Jake together :/ Heck, I even made a Trixie/Jake story just to change up the archive (You should check it out xD It's not suckish, don't worry xD). Anyway, great job with the originality :)

Ok, I'm really loving the story :) And I'm sorry for the long review :D! I just really enjoy this :) Update soon if you can :)

So nice to see a different kind of fic. Jaske (Jasmine/Jake) was quite unexpected but it's a refreshing from the forbidden love cliché (though I love it too, Jaske is a bit less complicated).

It's interesting and refreshing. It seems these Matutinus guys are going to be a hard time. Good job with the writting though a bit more of description would be nice.

very well written and well done. very descriptive though not much as to make it boring. Also the Rose/Jake cliché seems absent (so far). Also it seems that there's enough family drama to cause some nice conflict without becoming an agnsty soap opera. So Update ASAP.

Wow, this is truly interesting :) I love your writing style :D! The story was descriptive and it was well-written...me likey :D! And I'm sensing some romancing blossoming in Hayley's life and I can't wait to see that! And finally! I found a fic that doesn't have a Rose/Jake pairing. I'm liking this Jake/Jasmine pair :D! Can't wait to see more of that. Update soon :)

Great so far! I look forward to seeing where this goes!