of the Chosen One, maybe we'll see what Yugi's part is, finally! But... It never came. All I got was Yugi holding Atem's hand and then Atem being like "Naw, I got this."

And I get that Atem is the main character in this story... But seeing as though the chosen one was supposed to be the twins... In the end, it seemed like Yugi could've just dropped dead and the story would have the same result.

I'm only pointing this out, not to be rude, but to say that I felt you were leading up to something with Little Yugi, but he was reduced to background character with only meager bits of dialogue.

I was so sure that Yugi was going to have a little more of a part to play in the plot of this and was rather disappointed when he didn't. The way you set up the story was interesting; twins whose souls made up the chosen one together, one symbolizing Atemu's light and darkness.

Where you started to lose me is when I felt that Anzu came in to replace Yugi's place as the light. In the beginning, Atem says that Yugi is much stronger than him. I was hoping to see what he meant by that since he said that Yugi would find out what he meant.

Then Atem finds out that Solomon's been hurt and Yugi's been kidnapped... Then makes out with Anzu and plays with little matchmaker games. You can start to see where my confusion comes from, seeing as you write these brothers as if they have a close bond, but then Atem only takes off when he thinks it will benefit Anzu and himself.

Then I think "Well, maybe since Atem said that Yugi was stronger than him and they're BOTH part o

I don't see why Anzu thinks ALL men are trying to get into people's pants when adorable, innocent boys like Yugi exist.

waw... nice resolve. atemu now back to the palace. great job. see you again...

hm... atem the ignorant. anzu the not sensitive... sigh...

hmm. sad chapter really... but i am glad everything is alright..

waw... identical progress... i like it.

hmm... nice development. trouble start now.

This was a great story. I enjoyed it. Continue writing more atem/Anzu/tea fanfiction. Good job

FINALLY ITS DONE :D
I can now breathe... I will definitely have to reread this story since its been a while since I started reading it.
I was not disappointed at all. It was well worth the wait and now that its finished everything will make more sense.

I really like it, I was shocked a little bit. I really enjoyed it. It was full of drama and was so romance and very funny. And when you used the story title I got up and said "bamm she use the title in the story" and dnace at the same time. I can wait until we meet again.

I love this chapter, happy new year too.

That you like her and love her part reminds me of happy from fairy tail X3 love your work

Aw. That was a sweet ending. I'm glad Anzu was able to save the day :)

That, story, was... AWESOME! No words that I could think of could out it simply, just that! Loved it, and hope to meet again. In time... hue hue hue