It’s only the first chapter and I can already tell that I’ll love this story.

Please continue.

I’m so glad for the updates, this is one of my favorites

I love Mouser, she’s such a ruthless role model XD

I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

Really good story. Evelyn is a fantastic OC, probably one of the best I’ve seen yet. The way you’ve integrated her into the storyline is almost seamless, my only pathetic fallacy is the rate in which Sebastian and Evee became acquainted. Methinks it was a fair bit fast.

Greatly looking forward to the next chapter update.

Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon. It took me days to read this entire story and I loved every minute of it. Course during the Weston arc it felt like mouser wasn’t around enough, but it’s an all boys school so it’s understandable, still it feels like we don’t see her activities enough outside her Phantomhive duties and the ones we do so are separated by a large gap, for example, what’s she done with Alois Trancy? Also she mentioned making her own personal hell? What’d she mean by that? Has she been to hell yet? And also, she’s mentioned being allies with people like jack and Charlotte, but never elaborated on the relationships just calling them allies. But she and Charlotte seem more like close sisters, with payments being a mere formality, and Jack seems like a good friend of hers? She also cared a great deal for Alois but she never straight out calls them her friends. Her relationship with Elizabeth also seems a lot like hers with Alois, she acts like a big sister to her.

... bakuretsu bakuretsu la la la!~ bakuretsu bakuretsu bakuretsu la la la Ekuploshion!...
sorry but when she brought up explosions I had to reference thoes wonderful dorks.
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Slight errors in spelling it is a really good story, unlike a true fan I’ve olny watched the anime so reading from here is like an expanded manga? Regardless I would like to keep reading, several authors on this site get away with sex scenes but if you do move could you post a link in your profile page?

...Wasn't she suposed to still be living in an orphanage? When did that change to the atic of a bar?

The olny is problem I have with this story so far from chapter 1 to now is the spelling and lack of any real impact your OC has on the story, she dosent really change anything other than bringing early attention to the spider demon.

Hello! I just wanted to let you know what a beautiful story like this. Mouser's characterization and background is exquisite, and your writing style is simply a joy to read. And as for your world building... I am simply speechless.

I just love Charlotte and Sitri. I know that Sitri is probably a very high ranking demon in Hell, because hey, Sitri is simply a very famous demon. Which leads to Sebastian... I simply love the way you still haven't revealed Sebastian's true name because of him being under contract. But I have always thought of him as a very well-known demon, maybe even one of the princes of hell. I have always had an inclination to believe that he was Mephistopheles, but meh, he could literally be anybody. (Unsubtle hint as to how desperate I am for you to reveal who you think he is in the story... :D)

But again, your world building is simply fantastic. I love the entire Cait Sith race and am soooo excited to see more from them! Mouser is just the absolute best! And somehow, I have a strange desire for Sebastian to mark Agni. I just love the entire bromance between the two and the fact that Agni is one of Sebastian's true friends. I was absolutely completely heartbroken when Agni died in the recent chapters... oops, spoilers, but I'm sure that you're up to date because I didn't miss that subtle reference about Sebastian being named after the dog in Finny's backstory snippet XD But yeah, AGGGGNIII! NOOOO, DON'T LEAVE POOR SOMAAAA!

Oh, and how could I go without mentioning Grell and Mouser's relationship? Just simply entertaining and masterful. The absolute best. Poppet and Evee. Classic. They way you write your reapers... fabulous.

And Finally, we get to Sebastian and Mouser. By far, I think that your story has the best progression between Sebastian and an OC ever. The pacing is simply wonderful and we can see them slowly starting to fall in love with each other. I almost laughed myself silly when I read Pluto and the triplets calling Sebastian Mouser's mate. It hit me very hard when I read the scene with Alois' death and his question to Mouser about whether she had been loved before, and I absolutely adore watching the two stubborn demons fall for each other. While Ciel and Elizabeth may be the most entertaining couple, Sebastian and Mouser are by far couple goals. I just cannot wait for the day for them to say that they love each other. I salivate just thinking about it...

Thank you so much for writing this story, I had an extremely enjoyable time reading it. I was so engrossed in it from the beginning to the end that I finished all 500k words in just two days. Yes, very, very engrossed...

Please keep up the fantastic work and I will definitely be looking forward to more installments of Mouser and Sebastian's adventures in the future!

Have a wonderfully fantabulous day!

~AshGopal

I loved it looking forward to the next chapter

Whoo! that was A LOT! But there's just so much to love! I love how all the characters interact with this new character, I love how defined Mouser is: she's a bastard's thief who is practical and professional but loves mischief and romance novels. She has wonderful control and takes time to make the CHOICE of becoming a demon. Regrets are not a thing she typically indulgences in, her practical motto, "no one is coming to save you, so do it yourself." It's sad to say that, at least in my experience, this type of character done well is few and far between in the FanFiction world. I love how Mouser sees Grell as she wants to be seen. I love her humor, what I'm trying to say is I would be part of her fan club if she had one! XD But most of all what I love is Mouser and Sebastien's relationship. It's part teach/student part lovers, it's intimate, trusting, but at the same time they wouldn't call it love. Mouser's actually pretty sure that when she can stand on her own, she will leave. It's new and refreshing and I like it because with everything you've written that's pretty much par for the course for demons, while also leaving room for the steaks to change or stay right where they are. And somehow that just makes it all the more intriguing and I cannot wait to see more! There is no question, you should be beaming with pride because of this story.

I spent the whole week reading this beginning to end I love it looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the chapter!