I LOVE your story, but could you please, please just make a bitch slap scene of Lyanna. Seriously! It's her and the Crown Prince's fault this whole mess started in the first place

For the love of everything holy and unholy this story needs to continue. Your work always draws me in and I get hooked. Tis Witchcraft I tell you.

I love this story. The politics and the characters are so intriguing. I love reading about jaime and I think ur take on other characters is spot on. You've given them virtues and highlighted they're faults. I look forward to reading what happens next.

You made the North cowards.

I has been a very long time since I read a very realistic portrayal of rebellion time characters. Overall a very well written fic.

Its odd being able to relate to Stannis, and it is just disappointing how Lyanna's views are. I dont think I would be able to look at her if she was my sister, I mean i love mine to the ends of the world, but I also hold them and expect to hold themselves accountable for their actions, something she clearly does not.

This story is absolutely brilliant! I was so heartbroken see that this was the last chapter :( please please please write another chapter, I would love to see the next interaction between Jaime and Elia, The one in chapter 15 gave me chills (in a good way!)
You have done a wonderful job with the characterization of each of the characters. This story is so unique, please update again!

I am in LOVE with this story.
1) I love how you portray others’ (especially Stannis’s ) perception of Lyanna and Rhaegar because honestly, I agree with it and wish people would recognize that as much as her and Rhaeger never intended to incite a war, what they did even without it would have been dishonourable (both to Elia, her kids, and to house Baratheon storm lands people - as well as her own house/father). I also love how you portray the kings guard.
I love how you portray Stannis, and I am totally shipping Elia and Jaime. Incredible writing and plot !

It's been over a year since this story has been updated. I guess that it has been abandoned

This is the best fanfiction I ever read, you thought in everyone, even in theories and characters that are never mentioned but if you read the books you can start thinking about them (I say that for Maegor son of Aerion) I really love the way how you write about Lyanna, she annoys me but in the same way I think that she is like that, Rhaegar, my boy OMG, Stannins I love him, Jaime but Rhaella and Elia, they are my favorite characters in the books and in this fics, I love them.

I want to read more about this, and read more about Viserys, Renly and Stannis, this is awesome, greetings from Mexico I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

okay so wow. i read it in one sitting and i am damn impressed. you are brilliant. this twist with Jaime and Vaelor is intriguing. i like the contrast with how Rhaeghar made Elia a fool but now she has become a prize to be won.

Looking forward to more

So I have just about given up on seeing any of your stories updated. It's a shame really

And whiny Lyanna strikes again! No honestly, Stannis had a right to be upset, and while Lyanna cannot take full blame for the war at least some of it is hers.

I might be the only one, but I really hate Lyanna. Elia is doing all she can to be kind, and Lyanna is not even thankful. Nothing excuses her actions, she can think, as she likes to tell people, and she should have known the repercussions of running away. Honestly I have heard her being whiny and telling people not to blame her. It takes two to make a baby, but she was part of that two. Elia is doing all she can to help, but lyanna is just proving to everybody that she is a child who cannot make good decisions.

Anyway, no matter how much I hate lyanna, I love your story! There are very few stories showing Elia in a good light... They all have her either being cast aside or becoming the evil wife. You showcased her struggle perfectly, while she is sad for her husband, she is angry at him, and she must put up a strong front. She seems to be a very strong woman.

I really hope that future (Jon?) will end up being friends with his siblings, and not hate them.

Thanks soooo much for writing such a great fic!