Woah. Dark ending. Interesting fic though.

It was funny and light and then it wasn't. Warn a reader next time! ;) But I love this, truly. I think the Fili-Kili one was my favourite. Thorin's was a close second.

Thank you for writing!

I hate the ending. Itshall be cut off from my mind.

Love It.

Wow! I love it! Awesome!

Now imagine...ninja hobbits! Middle Earth will never be the same.

This is a nice story, and I love the premise of it. My only suggestions would be to add a little sweetness to the bitter ending, maybe by getting contact from one of the dwarves or something so it ties the story together. Since the rest of the story is focused on the Company, the 1 felt kinda out of place and abrupt, and didn't really feel like an ending (although it is very well-written and does a great job of conveying emotion onto the reader; don't change that). Granted, this is also partly out of personal preference, and this is a great story! The humor in your sort was just what I needed after a long day ;)

I loved everyone except Dwalin, him I didn't understand. The ending was great.

I don't get it. why is he sad?

Very nice.

This story was so happy... and then you killed it with that ending. D:
Still like it, but wow, didn't see that coming...

Loved this :)

This was funny! And sad! :(

As for Fili & Kili, if the did manage to dye Bilbo's hair yellow - even gross Elf yellow_- they might have done him a favor, cause aren't Hobbits fond of yellow and green? Not trying to poke holes in you story by I can imagine thier faces when Bilbo isn't bothered by it ha!

Aaaawww! You cruel person! Here I was laughing out loud (my family will look at me funny later) and bafm! sad ending.
Love Nori and Fili&Kili vignette the best. Though Thorin's one was cute :)

#unexpectedfeels