Love this haha made me smile

This was amazing to read! I just found this and I am glad I did. Hope you have the heart to finish this as I would love to find out what happens with K-Unit.

Please continue writing this story. I know life sometimes gets in the way but you said you'd finish this fic, and there is definitely more to add. Please consider it as I would hate to miss out on one of my favorite AR fanfics. Anyways, can't wait for more!

I know this is a little bit late, but PLEASE keep writing. Is Alex’s school going to find out? What’s Jake’s reaction going to be? What will the teachers think? I love your writing so KEEP GOING! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

The US doesn't have Rememberence Day. I mean sh*t I don't even know if I spelt that right!

Can't wait to read what's next

I really enjoy this story, and I hope eventually that you are able to finish it. :) It's really good, one of my favorites, I think. Excellent writing, and plot. Thanks for sharing, even if you don't ever get the chance to finish it. It really is fantastic. Thanks!

Continue or i will track you down and kill you

I love this story!

I want him to meet K-unit again! They were always my favourite characters, and my fav AR pics are the ones where he goes back to BB

Keep it up!

I like it, i approve of this series

Wow. This is so good! The description is wonderful and flows fantastically, the characters all have a unique personality and part to play in the plot, and they are also realistic, which is hard to find in AR Fics. I love how each chapter is almost a separate story, but they all connect. It's very original and unique. Your action-description scales are perfect most of the time, but in high-action scenes (for example: the water collecting stunt), it was harder to picture. Try using similes so the readers can connect what you are trying to say to something they recognize. Otherwise, I find this story to be far superior to the others on this site. I hope that the next chapter comes soon.

Finally gotten around to reading your latest updates (I'm a bit behind on my emails). Anyway, I totally loved this chapter! Please please please update part 2 soon!

Wow, this is amazing! I hope you haven't forgotten about it, because it's truly a great piece of work. I love your writing style. There are a lot of bad AR fics on this website- with poor grammar, spelling mistakes, etc. I really like the current plot of your story too- nothing too cliche or action-y, but light, and fun with a touch of humor. Love this piece. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Btw, I can't believe this is your first ff! You're a natural!

I love this! The fact that K-unit is here made me love it even more! Too many exclamation marks but this fic deserves it! Keep it up :)

Oh my gods. I just Re-read this chapter while listening to the HTTYD2 soundtrack Stoick's Ship. I did not expect the feels. Holy freaking moly. Gah.

THE FEELS ARE ALL BROKEN.