Reviews for Family Business
Frog1 chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
You really should do a prequel to this story, I would love to read how Heath met the rest of his siblings, stepmother, and then finding out he is Tom Barkley's son (during this particular time frame and what you hinted at in this chapter).
MaryCS chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
great story- thanks for sharing
zekeschance chapter 6 . 3/23/2013
Thank you for such a lovely story. All of your hardwork and dedication is greatly appreciated. And I'm sure Silas didn't mind!
cag45 chapter 6 . 3/21/2013
This was a great story. You are very creative and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18/2013
approved and loved it - thanks for this!
emjac chapter 6 . 3/17/2013
I know nothing about the Big Valley, but enjoyed your story nonetheless. I guess that speaks to your writing abilities! Thanks for the story.
may7fic chapter 6 . 3/17/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, Queena, and am so impressed with how well you meshed the two "canons" together. I love your Barkley voices in particular though all were terrific. Thanks for sharing this utterly unique story.
Willful Redhead chapter 6 . 3/17/2013
I enjoyed that quite a bit! Thank you so much!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
I am loving this story - two of my favorites in one story! I really like the modern day Barkleys and I can definitely see Adam and the McFaddens taking in another orphan and loving him as a brother - can't wait for more!
cag45 chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
Nice job of not only weaving the Barkley's into the McFadden's, but also you are doing a clever job of combining the storylines of Heritage with the Pilot ep of Seven Brides for Seven Brothers.
cag45 chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
This was a really good chapter. I love the interaction between the Barkley's and the McFadden's. Now I'm off to read more!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story! Please keep it up.
cag45 chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
I'm loving it! You write the BV characters so brilliantly. I can hear them...especially Jarrod and Victoria! It's so neat to have the Barkleys in the 1980's with the McFaddens! Kudos for your imagination!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
When I read your description of the story I was a little skeptical, but I can't believe how well it works. Great creativity!
zekeschance chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
Wow! I have to say I was excited to see another story by you and a crossover with the Big Valley. Another one of my favorite show from back in the day! You've done an amazing job with putting the Barkleys in modern form and your story is gripping. You've got all the characters so real and I can actually hear their voices. I can't wait for more. Thanks so much!
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