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aww... please continue~~ they are so cute~~

Updatee it pleaseeee, you left me hanging

It has been surprising. I loved it. I love watching Taichi overprotective. It's so adorable and annoying at the same time. I enjoyed the conversation together. Sou a big fan of Takari (either friendship or something more).

I like where you ended it and I don't see the point in a new chapter. so cute!

lol, of course taichi would be overprotective of hikari around any guy, even takeru. I wonder why hikari never objected about her question not being about takeru but sodas instead. maybe it's implying something? *waggles eyebrows*

LMAO! And you just topped yourself. Well done! XD

LOL! OMG. Hilarious.

First of all: SORATO. YES. I wish I could say it was all I saw, but alas. Your entire fic captured my attention.

Second of all: Taichi and Mimi were especially hilarious throughout, but Koushirou completely stole the show with the final line. XD

This was such a fun and enjoyable read that I can ignore the Takari implications. :)

This was lovely. :)

Absolutely enjoyed this! Hilarious and adorable.

I was surprised to see that you posted up a part 2 since the first part really did seem like a one-shot, but I dug it and felt it was a nice follow-up.

I'm not sure if this is continuing or not, but ill keep my eyes peeled.

Once more you've impressed me! This was really humorous, to the point where I demand you write more funny tales! I kid of course, but you catch my drift.

I had two favorite parts, the crying in the snow line, and then Koushiro's sole line was like a cherry on top of it all.

Oh wow ... I never knew there was an update xD

AWWWWWW! That was sooo cute, well written, and hilarious!

I really enjoyed this short story and it was very entertaining and all, but i do feel like the second chapter was cut short. I would hope you continue this if you want of course because in my opinion it feels too cut off and leaves you with too many questions of what was Hikari thinking when she said what she did, and how Tachi would react when/if he finds out he has her out.