Bueno, estoy feliz de que todo terminara bien, me dolió mucho cuando hirió a Jack pero sabía que él no culparía a Bunny por eso.

This is a fantastic story! It breaks my heart at the beginning but by the end I can't stop smiling! Well Done!

i loved the ending xxxx
not so much the rape xx

This was a really good story it had an really intresting plot with a lot of good ideas you also wrote this out perfectly.
The lemon were OMG sooo hot.
I hope to read some more DarkBunnyxjack stoies from you in time.
Thanks for the story-fireworks

I love jacks new clothes there so amazing I can picture him now.
I really wanna see how the story warps up maybe on a lemon *drools*

You wrote the fight scenes out pretty well.
The idea of pitch useing bunnys fears as a way to change him into dark bunny was a really good idea and how he was useing his powers thro bunny so In another way pitch was still weak.
Noooo I hope jacks going to be alright !

Oh my goodness that was so hot I really love your lemons there so hot !
I am really loving this story so far and it's not rushed at all.

Ooooo this was a very dark and you wrote it out really well.

I really like the idea you have for dark bunny and the plot is getting really good and I have a feeling there be some dark themes in the next chap so that be intresting to see how dark you go.

Finally I have found a DarkBunnyXJack story and so far I really like it and it's from one of my fav fiction athour so even if it it's one of your early stoies I still know it's going to be good.

FUCK MOOR!{/./}

your stories are so beautiful! i love the way you writing and also Jack and Bunny! XD Wild Bunny is so sexy! I could die for him! You are great!

This was just heart attacking, I seriously feel like I've been on an emotional rollercoaster and it wouldn't let me off until it was finished with me. At first I thought it was something I have been working on but it wasn't even close to the level mine was at it reaches higher than mine ever will. Grammar, vocabulary, spelling, flow, just everything really was absolutely on key here in this amazing story. Astounding job!
-AS

great story, I loved the plot and how to beat fear. be sure to write about this cute race horse. I like.

Yay Jack and Bunny forever lol! great story!