An OC, Pitch, new guardian fic that's actually well written? Wow. This is actually nice to see.

Loved the description of Pitch and his velvety voice!

Still here love, the fluff was excellent, very cute. Hope all is well. Miss you! Your writing is still excellent! :) will try to catch you on discord soon!

Hi! :D

Just wanted to say that I miss reading about Wisp and Trick lol

They've kind of become my OTP in the Guardians universe, even though they don't really exist in the Guardians universe :'(

I'm not putting pressure on you or anything. I just thought I'd let somebody know that I missed them, and you're basically the only I know who knows they even exist XD

Also, I don't remember if I posted a review on this latest chapter. I might have, or maybe I didn't.

But gotta say, if I hadn't fallen in love with Trick's love for Wisp, I'd be rooting for Pitch. It's just so sweet how much Wisp makes him feel so calm and comfortable.

Anyway, see ya around~

Awwwwwwww!
I loved this one.
It's so CUTE.
I can't wait until the next update:D

I know this sounds horrible but...

KILL THE MAN IN THE MOON!

Oh Moon!
My imagination is going WILD!
Like now I'm imagining Pitch POSSESSING Wisp!

I don't know why but I want things to get more complicated by Jack growing feelings for Wisp as well and then the three guys (Pitch, Jack and Trick) to have a full on battle over it.

What the hell just happened!?

(Stares at screen for half an hour before re-reading last scene, several times.)
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!
I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE DID THAT!Xo

Aw... So approve of the fluff, by the way!
Although, I do not approve of cognac. Maybe it's just because I'm me and me never liked overly bitter tastes and the thought of a morning hangover.
Still cute though, still cute.

What a time to post a backflash... or is that just one of Pitch's fantasies? However, it's awfully sweet and it somehow makes me dread what is coming next.

Moon
I LOVE THIS!

AwwwwwWWWWWW THAT WAS SO ADORABLE! Ohmygosh writers like you are amazing where you can write from completely different points of view and characters and personalities while still keeping the other characters their same selves and know I'm just rambling but okay. Yeah that was AWESOME and thank you for the redo (even if I only skimmed it trying to get to the bonus) it looks like it cleared up a few things. Anyhoo thank you for another chapter and keep up the good work!

holy shit...I fucking can't believe it! That bastard Manny, making fun of Pitch for trying to protect Wisp! Shit, now what? Please write more soon! I want to see how this Manny business will come to an end, but I also hope to see Wisp ending up with Pitch! Don't get me wrong, I love Trick! I really do, but I just want Pitch to be able to be peaceful and happy like when he was sleeping in her lap! He just needs this so much! Trick needs love as well, but he has his and Wisp's flame girl. Pitch has no one... Please write more!

That last chapter was amazing and also a bit confusing and it left me quite restless. I can't believe Pitch would surrender just like that without following some plan. But whether that foul version of Manny is bluffing or not, neither of them is going to take that kind of a risk, so he's got them with their backs against the wall. What can they possibly do now?
So how about a new chapter? ;o)