I can see Amy saying something like that, it's a red head thing.

Haha well I can't stop laughing! Wish you would keep updating! ツツツ

I like that Jenny meets River, but a few things...

"Also Melody Pond, but no one calls her that anymore." He calls her that & very lovingly. So do her parents. We see that.

"I left you in a hospital because you needed it. The best hospital in the universe!" This isn't you but the show: The foreknowledge doesn't mean he couldn't stay until she at least woke up. She went to sleep with her parents at last knowing who she is and loving her, She woke up abandoned again. It's a flaw in the episode. But the Doctor (and Amy) were fine with abandoning Melody in DOTM so... he can't justify it really.

"How did you-" "Time Lord." So is River (AGMGTW) so why didn't she say so? Even with saying she doesn't believe they really are because they're not from Gallifrey (like 10 said to Jenny)?

"How did you-" "Time Lord."

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Very cute story! :3

Loved this story! I laughed so hard at the end!

I it! I was grinning so much reading that last sence.

Ooh, poor Doctor. I bet if Amy was telepathic, she'd send him a mental slap.

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In other words, I absolutely positively loved this fic. I always wondered what exactly would happen if River found out about Jenny, and this was just perfect.

*flails*

Ahem. *bows* Thank you for this wonderful fic.

XD though i do NOT like amy, love Rory and I think the relationship between river and the doctor is SO fake, this is is an awesome story.

This is cute and hilarious!

cool

haha! LOVE this!

This was perfect! And I really wish there was more!

Snerk... I swear I've seen this episode. So funny. Nicely done.

Noooooooo! Don't smack the Matt! No right never saying that ever again. Don't smack the smith is slightly better. I don't know just don't smack him!