It would be cool if they celebrated their DeathDay, because the Hogwarts ghosts do.

1. I think Dudley came along now because Lily was so nice to him. Actions speak louder than words, and they have an impact on people

2. I think so, because now that Lily asked Snape to be nicer, I feel like it won't be such a pain to read about Occlumency. Maybe Harry could actually learn it and he would never go to the Hall of Prophecy because You-Know-Who couldn't implant the fake image in his mind. So Sirius would never die? And Harry wouldn't learn about the prophecy?

3. ARTHUR WEASLEY DEFEAT LUCIUS MALFOY PLEEEAAAASSSEE

4. Lily & James/Harry Tonks/Lupin maybe even Lily/Dudley or Petunia/Dudley?! Also, maybe Lily's second child could be an Animagus, like James?

5. I don't really have much of an impression, because we haven't seen much of her yet.

Was it a bird? Was it a plane? No, and we'll have to wait to find out!

Your English is actually very good considering it's your second language. I know how hard it is to learn a second language (I was shoved into another continent when I was, like, four and therefore had no choice!) There are small grammar errors, such as misspelling but they are mostly the made-up words of Rowling's. I am so lucky to have come across this fanfiction!

So putting barely a paragraph of Dursley's is enough Dursley for one chapter? I wish Rowling agreed... I certainly do...

This keeps me alive during quarantine. - I mean You-Know-What.

No offence, but the last 3 lines sound like you randomly said the name of a character, the word influence and the word some.

1. I reckon it would be so akward that no one did anything, and then Cho finds someone else
2. No! Are you human?
3. Absolutely.
4. Bring someone for Severus. Sirius never struck me as the marrying type, and he wold be ashamed to keep the 'Black' line going
5. Yes please!
Can this just be a perfect version of HP where nothing goes wrong and only made up people we didn't care about die? I really want all of the Marauders (exept Pettigrew, who cares about him) to live... I hated the fact that they all died... Or maybe you could bring in new characters, and make them lovable but annoying and then they can die?
DK how you would feel about killing your own creation though...

Yikes! 5 finals?! NEXT WEEK?! (I know I sound like Hermionie but still) you shouldn't have written this so soon before your finals!

Finally! So close! (I really feel like something will go wrong.)

This is... beutiful

I think Lily would definitely be angry, but she wouldn't go as far as calling a girl a slut that she didn't even know. It's just not her personality.

#WolfStar
#Drarry

The beginning of the chapter tho..here's how I would imagine it
Dumbledore: *sigh* Sirius, you've had too much too drink and are you tired?
Sirius: *is tired* iM nOt tIr eD
Dumbledore: *groans* ...

Good story. But, I'm disappointed that you had Lily and James Potter trust Dumbledore so easily. Plus, had them have amnesia when they awoke, that they didn't recall who was their secret keeper. Also, please don't put Ginny and Harry together. Or, Tonks and Remus. And, don't kill off Sirius!