I definitely think this story needs another chapter just to tie up a few more ends! I would really like to see what you have in store for Ken and I would also like to see a little bit more on Takeru and Daisuke talking more about what they had been up to in the last four years. I like the story a lot great work!

HOW COME IT ALWAY INVOLVES KEN!

I'M GOING TO KILL THAT BASTERD!

Aww, so cute. _ I'm both a fan of Kenkeru and Daikeru, and the thrown in Taito was great. *Huggles fic* So kawaii...

Awesome job writing this!

-Puppy

wow...i loved it...but i think you should continue it a little..i wantto know what happend to ken...poor ken

:( and takeru...i love him

please continue it! And have Ken fall in love with somebody else. I feel bad for him

I really think you should keep going on this story, it's way to short. You should have Ken come back or something really exciting!
Oh, yes. I bet you got this idea from Pearl Parbor. To many ideas are alike.

great! great! great! and did i mention great?

Wow. The whole was story was just so great! I've always loved AU fics where the idea is a war going on and one of the two staying behind...

Poor Ken though...and Miya's just great too!

This story was great. Lots of angst. Id love to see more. I would like to see some more detailed love scenes between take-chan and dai. And maybe ken could have a revelation that he is bi and could hook up with Miyako. That would make it a bit happier for him. It was nice that yamma soften up in the end, cause i would never have forgiven him if he ruined it for takeru and daisuke.

i really loved this story and think you should countinue it and have ken fall in love i felt real bad for him

only one thing to say. you need to continue this. you've left it hanging, you need some closure with Ken. You have some spelling and grammatical mistakes, but aside from that, this is great! _ It's so hard to find good Daikeru's nowadays... write more soon!

only one thing to say. you need to continue this. you've left it hanging, you need some closure with Ken. You have some spelling and grammatical mistakes, but aside from that, this is great! _ It's so hard to find good Daikeru's nowadays... write more soon!

I'm too lazy to sign in. Nyeh.

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Well, me 'n mah muses think this is great! They've been working overtime on those plot bunnies! - *huggles 'le isckle plot bunnies*

Aya: Yarp!

Kohaku: Hai! -

Shaddup, you guys, this is mah review. Anyhoo, where's Kara, Vin, Vincent, Riken and the others?

Aya: Erm... *rolls eyes*

Kohaku: Well, Vin, Vincent and Riken went off together. Kara took off with Meori and Hoshiko... And I dunno where Azzy is. -;;

*sighs* Anyhoo, BlueMoon person! Write more or mah muses (all 8 of 'em!) will come and shoot ya!

~Gem-chan and her muses~

I'm starting to like this. I know it's been a lttle while since you lats updated, but I hope you'll be doing that soon. I wanna know what wil happen.

GOODY-DAMN-TWO-SHOES! You could make it a lemon and just put it under R! Oh well. I like this story and it's cute how you're going to have Ken happy in the end. I always hate