A well-written story, short and to the point. Everyone was in character, and the situation was plausible, too. (Though I'd have thought the Doctor would have understood the implications of what he was saying-well, perhaps he did, actually.) 10 out of 10 stars.

Ooh, about time that Tegan got put into her place. The Doctor put up with an awful lot of bratty behaviour from Tegan over their time together, and she was very rude to him at times about the Tardis.

I agree that at times she was a spoilt child, far more so than a lot of other Companions.

O.o Ooooh my gosh.

Nice job! About time he was firm with Tegan. I don't care much for her, but I think she's one of the most realistic companions. I like the length too. Keep writing!