SLAM A POKEBALL IN MEOWTH'S DAMN FACE

woulda been nice to see this fic continued

Indeed spearow, women very very very are complicated

How. Do. You. Trip. Over. A. One. Foot. &. Seven. Inch. Ball

Ash the MVP. Misty older but wants some of that Ketchum!

Please continue! It was just getting good.

This is great and funny fanfic ever. Can't wait for more chapters soon.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Please let Ash catch the Aerodactyl.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

When you get to the chapter of the fossil hunt at the Canyon can you let Ash catch a Omantye/Omastar, Kabuto/Kabutops, and the Aerodactyl (mostly the Aerodactyl)

Also will Charmeleon be disobedient, completely loyal, or be loyal but give Ash a hard time?

I like it.

I love the Statistics you've given at the end of the chapter

ok so you stop writing that good story you had about Naruto in an alternate universe for this shit. i mean this story is good but its not as original or creative and suspenseful as the one about Naruto. i see you sir are a waste. you wasted such a great story.

I like the new flirty Ash. Give it a few years and he'll be a successful (but mostly importantly TACT or subtle) version of Brock.

Great chapter, was Magikarp (now Gyrados) playing matchmaker with Ash and Misty? Might want to find her a male Feebas, not mention a Milotic would make a nice addition to the team.

Awesome. Although I think you overpowered Charmander a bit, not that I don't like overpowering, but what idiot throws away a Charmander that know Dragon Claw?

Great chapter, I liked the little backstory about Sandshrew(Sandslash).

P.S
If at all possible, teach Butterfree Electro-Web. It can learn move via tutoring. If you have Ash do it himself, I suggest getting Pikachu to run low level current through Butterfree while he's using String Shot, then stop Pikachu from electrocuting him without telling Butterfree and see if he keeps the current going on his own.

Nice chapter, was that a reference to LotR with the Beedrill? Or is Dexter developing sentience, or slowly becoming a Porygon or both?

Keep up the good work and before I forget, nice work on Ash pissing off Gary by getting with his sister. Best revenge I have ever seen in a fanfic other than just outright punching him the face. (Best scene out of the entire HP movie franchise was Hermonie decking Malfoy in the third one.)