Reviews for The Unnatural Prodigy
mochimadness chapter 2 . 7/19
I'm think Sasuke was actually a nice person before the Uchiha massacre. He felt like he was living in Itachi's shadow and probably a bit standoff-ish but it was mostly good natured until after he became a power hungry avenger.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18
Have a yammanka or two walk their minds and you get all the evidence you want... Danzo's seal... Orders given.. All that crap becomes a very MOOT point when you can read minds and tear the info directly out! Then all ways of stopping someone from talking become obsolete. (i dunno why that's so difficult for authors to "get"... Also hiruzen can very much "forcibly MAKE people change their minds about naruto" he can have an entire clan deployed that actually can FORCE them to think however he wants!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/9
Hinata has too much control over naruto just let him let loose on Sasuke's arrogant ass
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 10 . 6/5
ok and can't wait for the next chapter in this story
damienfarrar10 chapter 2 . 5/19
This is a good story so far
Guest chapter 2 . 5/15
Honestly when you made Hinayana say that Sasuke’s not worth it it’s almost as if she was siding with Sasuke! I dislike story’s that jump into pairings way to quickly it makes a story feel cheap
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10
you sadistic bastard do you enjoy causing naruto pain what a sadistic and masochistic freak are you
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26
you are a sick fuck for torturing naruto i hope you burn in hellfire
radTWITCH chapter 2 . 4/26
I was enjoying this story until the Sasuke confrontation at the end of this chapter. Hinata is crazy annoying why would she stop him from fighting Sasuke when Sasuke insinuated that it was him who told his clan members to skin naruto alive for hours on end, because he lost a spar to naruto. Like yeah maybe if they just beat him up or something I can understand letting it go, but he was literally skinned alive multiple times! you dont just let something like that go.
misteryman526 chapter 6 . 4/12
Have you ever noticed that within a couple chapters of any writer posting a note saying "I WILL NOT ABANDON THIS STORY!", they abandon the story?
jamthacreator chapter 10 . 4/6
Excited for the next chapter! Keep it up. Your friends story sounds great tell him to keep up the amazing work!
Nightmare chapter 2 . 4/1
Pls stop the bashing between naruto and hinata bro pls
evanonymous chapter 2 . 2/12
Oh my god that interaction with Sasuke made me want to throw up. This is happening in full view of teachers like Iruka and he just stands in awe? Then Sasuke pretty much gets his dick sucked by Naruto in retaliation for what he did, and Hinata defends Sasuke in retaliation for insulting them both and ADMITTING to having his clan members SKINNING NARUTO? Your version of literally all of these characters is just so ass backwards that I'm expecting they're just made of pure, concentrated teen angst and poor writing workshops.
WarauAkuma chapter 5 . 2/7
I was 5'9" on my 13th birthday and I wasn't even the top 3 in my class. And I'm of Indian ethnicity. So 4'10" is too short man.
thegrison chapter 9 . 10/26/2019
Yea was good until the Naruto found the snakes lab. Really? Just no. The 9 tails shadow clone is bull stink. Just no no no. That was a bad thing. Naruto healing is bull stink too. He heals while using the 9 tails chakra otherwise he heals faster than most but can NOT regrow limbs or fingers. Healing is different from regrowing limbs.
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