Wow. This is... really good.

I don't normally write reviews, but this is an amazing story and so, so, sad. I've read it about five different times and I still can't stop my heart from sobbing. The sadstuck is driving me to tears. I love the idea, which is a really realistic end to The Game (which deserves the caps.) in this sort of universe. If you won't mind, I'd love to write a story set in this universe. It is just so sad and wonderful at the same time.

I need more
dear lord this is so good I need like ten

WHYWHYWHYWHYWHY
*buries face in pillow*
*sobs* Talk about star-crossed lovers...this is pretty much the literal example.

I know, right? Why is this not further explored? Jack and John have so much in common, they could be fantastic friends. And Bunny and Dave might hit it off, too.
On that note, John might also get along with the Stoll brother or Leo Valdez, if you know who that is.

COOUUUNNNTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUEEEEEEE! )

Countinue!

aww, this is really cute... :D

WAHHHHH

This is beautiful, you need to ether add more to this (i.e. More chapters) or if this is finished put the story up for adoption, this is too beautiful to let die!

I'm sorry for any typing mistakes I may write here, because it's hard to see the keyboard through my tears. This is just so perfect and beautiful! I'm trying hard to breathe because my throat seems to be tightening up and my chest feels like I have an elephant sitting on it and my eyes burn and- *Sniffle.* I- I don't think I can write anymoe without bawling... So i'm just gonna go share this story with everyone I know an have them see the beauty of this... Bye! Thanks for the feelz! ;u;

This is so perfect. I love how you fit the sand being black sometimes, and Jack being a prankster. He and John would totally get along so well... And he and Dave...

Amazing. And so sad, and so perfect.

INHUMAN SCREECHING

hello feels, I didn't expect you today.