Reviews for Return of the Lost Hero |
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mackec02 chapter 2 . 1/3/2018 Hey, so I read your story about 6 months ago and I really loved it, mainly because I could never figure out a way to have the team bring Wally back myself. That being said, I was wondering if you would care if I added on to your story on my account. The first chapter would be an recap on what happened at the end of season 2, and then at the end I would send my readers to learn and comment off this chapter of your story. After that I would be making the rest up as I go, and I would be happy to add in any plot twists or what have you that you would like. That, or I could send you what I have, and you can add on here, and give me credit in the Author’s Note portion. That way it’s all connected with your work, but I still get my share. Well, let me know what you think! And I can’t say this enough; I love how you brought him back, it’s amazing. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2015 Epilogue pls |
Raquel chapter 1 . 4/9/2015 ?There you happy? !Now get writing! |
empty to be deleted chapter 1 . 12/25/2014 RANT: So first of all, I love your name: howtotrainyourwally. Wally is my favorite character from ANY fandom. I would be gushing about him to my friend, and she'd be like "Oh, I like Castiel more." Gah. Second, halfway through this chappie, I realized that when Wally ceased in YJ, Endgame, he kinda flickered and then faded, right? And in JLU, the cartoon, Wally was running super fast in Divided We Fall (one of the episodes) and then HE FLICKERED AND FADED. And right after that, THEY PULLED HIM OUT OF THE SPEEDFORCE. WALLY IS STILL ALIVE, HE IS MERELY TRAPPED IN THE SPEEDFORCE AND WHEN THEY TAKE YJ OFF OF HIATUS THEY WILL BRING HIM BACK AND HE WILL BE THE FASTEST SPEEDSTER IN HISTORY, LIKE HE IS IN COMIC BOOK CANON. HEROES NEVER DIE. I kinda had a lead finger on the shift button near the end, but it was justified because HEROES NEVER DIE. |
katze78 chapter 2 . 10/20/2014 Could you please send me the epilogue? thanks! your story is great! |
andrea carolina chapter 1 . 11/12/2013 I LOVE THIS STORY I CAN'T STOP CRYING ! :') I LOVE IT I JUST I LOVE IT |
DISCONTINUED1738 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013 The first episode I ever saw of YJ was when Endgame premiered, even though I didn't understand anything that was going on, I still ended up tearing up a bit when he disappeared... : ( |
KibaKibblez chapter 1 . 7/29/2013 Artemis: Your a dick Dick: Did somone call my name? Me: lol |
C chapter 1 . 4/23/2013 Hey thanks. Just wanted to say that your stories are some of the best that I have ever read. Thanks and I hope you write more! |
No One chapter 1 . 4/15/2013 This is so sweet! I really would love to see a follow up with the League and Paris. Can you imagine Wally's face when he hears that they are finally respected in the League? It's going to be priceless! Anyway, your writting style is really nice. I didn't see any major grammaticcal flaws. Good luck in all your writing exploits! We await a follow-up to this fic! Vale! |
Lil chapter 1 . 4/9/2013 Please write an epilogue. I really want to read about Wally and Artemis's wedding. And Paris of course :) |
The February Rose chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 I think that you should do the epilogue. That would be so cool! |
KyaTessa chapter 1 . 4/5/2013 I LOVE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THE EPILOGUE! |
janetf28 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 Great story! |
mark in orlando chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 TRULY AWSOME , MORE PLEASE . REMEMBER THE MORE YOU WRITE , THE MORE MORES YOU WILL GET IN REVIEWS . |