This chapter was a tad bit gruesome, but I like it.

I just had to tell you that your fic is 100 percents better than the Cave by masksarehot ;)

This is now my all-time favorite Legend of Korra fanfiction! I absolutely loved it. You write so beautifully and with emotion. It was the perfect mix of love, adventure, and humor. Cookie points to you, author! This story is going on my favorites list!

I fucking love this, i wish this happened instead of what actually did

That was soooo cute. loved it and the kids are sooo adorable

Aw I love it! Thank you and may God bless you and yours as well!

"Her met her gaze unflinchingly."
Edit.

You did really good for your first fanfiction. I really enjoyed reading it.

I like your writing voice, I picture at this soft tone, almost as though your sitting on a cliff with calming waves crashing(storms for the battles)below you.
I admit Amon and Korra make a lovely couple, it's a shame they didn't do that with the show instead of what they did...
Thank you for the past few days, they helped me stay sane with so much stress from school work and also aloud me think of new ideas for my books and current fanfics.
I hope you have a good day, and don't stop writing, you're a beautiful writer.
- Light

Yay korrasami again lol

I'm actually loving this story. Not that I like Amorra lol but it's good.

There better be more Korrasami lol

Korra, he is doing this because he cares!

Yay Amon talks to his brother! But he has a more difficult time sorting out his feelings for Korra.

Korra's reaction is understandable. But even Amon cannot deny how he somehow cares for her.