This is really brilliantly conceived. The verbal and non-verbal dialogue at the end was so well done. I always love the title.

AWE! SO CUTE!

The ending was so adorable and clever omg

So cute :) I love how you interpreted their relationship

Oh my gosh that was adorable.
I love it!

You're writing is awesome! :)

You captured all their personalities perfectly :)

This was perfect and hilarious. You're really good at writing Merlin, and I absolutely love every story you write for it. The fact that Merlin and Arthur can have a one-sided conversation with each other really shows how strong their friendship is. Heck, I bet that they could have a conversation even if BOTH of them lost their voices. Loved this!

That was really sweet :3
Exactly the kind of relationship they share :)

That's pretty cool when you can read someone else's thoughts like that, and ever slightly creepy...but all in all, good job.

That was very well done, you did a terrific job of capturing both Arthur and Merlin perfectly. Gwaine too, for that matter.

My favourite part was definitely when Merlin woke up and was able to conduct a one-sided conversation with Arthur; not only was it laugh-out-loud funny it was also completely in character and really highlighted the fact they know each other so well.

I particluarly liked the fact Merlin still hears Arthur say his name in that unique way of his, even when he's not actually *saying* it!

I'd never really thought of it in that way before but after reading the 'married without all the mushy bits' comment it struck me Gwaine was indeed right that it sums up the friendship between Arthur and Merlin :)

I very much enjoyed this.

This was fantastic! Seriously hope you write more Merlin fics like this... cos this was great. x_x Gotta love hurt Merlin. :D

Awwwww more like this please! I love it :D

Well done. You got the characters right. The story was fun to read.

Love it!

Ninja:D