You know what? Stark deserved better. I’m gonna go mourn him for a while.

~FFF

Poor Herobrine, he has been though alot, he has been thrown in lava 2 times, impaled by what I think was a gold sword, and had to stand about 80 blows from the Wither King, and nearly shot by Ridan (I think that was it) GIVE HIM A BREAK!

Honestly any human would be dead by now, but Herobrine is not human.

Why do people target Herobrine!? He has a mission given to him by Notch to scare humans into not going to some areas.

Also, remember how Herobrine was wounded for about 3 months in the first book, Danger? Well I think loosing his arms is WAAAY worse than that, and also, I just have a question...

I hear alot of stories of Herobrine not having a normal heart, but insted a diamond that vibrates, and it vibrates to act like a heartbeat. Is this true? PLEASE TELL ME!

Herobree (one of Herobrine's family members, but I am his sister)

(COMMENT ON CHAPTURE 21, OR AS THE PAGE SAID 20)

Yikes! I need to stop reading, because I strangely feel what is happening in the book just like Steve does, but I don't hurt after reading, I only feel weak, I really should stop... NO! I will keep reading, I can't stop now! (LOL I sound like Steve...) It feels weird knowing Steve is feeling what Herobrine feels and I feel what Herobrine feels as well, but it never did any harm to me, it does make reading it more enjoyable to be able to hear whats going on and feel what they are feeling, even when Herobrine feels nervous the back of my mind is screaming at me saying "Herobrine! Tell Notch why your going though Steve's mind!" And the strangest thing is my name is not Herobrine, it's HeroBREE, not Herobyran, not Herobain, it's Herobree! I am Herobree!

-Herobree (Herobrine's Sister)

(COMMENT ON CHAPTER 18, OR 17 IF YOU READ THAT PAGE)

Whoa... I see why it's rated "horror" now... I am SO gonna have nightmares, but I am fully fearless. And I had no idea Herobrine did these in his early days of Minecraft! He never told me about this! Wait, story loop! Notch never told Herobrine about these memories and Herobrine never told me about these stories! I have a bone to pick with Herobrine...

-Herobree (Herobrine's REAL Sister)

I always feel the same as... Well, whomever is injured or tired, I always get sleepy if Herobrine was up for too long, and it's the MIDDLE OF THE DAY! (Comment on chapter 8)

Herobree (one of Herobrine's 16 sisters)

Please make a youtube reading, if you do can you put a link to the reading on your account?

Whoa, that was a bit more disturbing than the previous installments, but still good. I guess I'm going to read through Wall, and I bet it's just as good as the first three parts.

yes make a reading or better yet a animation

Great story. I really want to see those mansions!

After reading Begin i have but one thing that keeps resurfacing in my head from this chapter. I don't know if this is just an error, but I can't figure it out...

"I know Notch, it was unfair. Just be thankful he didn't end up like his other brother, or the others for that matter." The man, Jeb was it, sighed and started to walk away. "Your brother was always a bit of a ticking time bomb."

I don't know why, but this line is permanately engrained in my head. It mentions another brother, but Herobrine only brother is Notch. (Who is speaking with Jeb) So why would Jeb call Notch 'his other brother' instead of just 'you'? That is unless it isn't a mistake, and there is another brother... I'm not sure for certain but I just wanted to ask. If it isn't a mistake then maybe the answer will be revealed in Wall? Thanks.

:0 me like. Do keep going please.

:O. THE WALL. SOUNDS MYSTERI

The ending wasn't that bad and started up Wall at the end of it there. I know how you feel with work though. For the past month I’ve been working 10-12 hour shifts and it's physically and mentally exhausting to come home and find the urge to write. I do have to say that I’m excited about Wall and what it's going to be about so don't rush, no one should push you into updating daily. Take your time and I solemnly pledge to wait patiently for the next story and it's chapters no matter if it takes 1 day or 5. Keep writing and I’ll keep looking forward to the next awesome chapter. :D

Far North... Wall... Far North... Wall. Wait an minute... Wasn't Starks widow and kid banished there? Amazing story, and can't wait for Wall

And it is over but another story has begun. I now undersrand the title as Jeb mentioned disturbances at 'the wall.' Cannot wait for the next story, your super big fan Cenobia100