The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

You should remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.

So this is before I've read: what's the point of a reader fic if you're imagining your name to be something else? Some people just use blanks, at least then it's a little easier to insert your name than reading Y/N.

i love how long this is... and i didn't got bored, your really good.

What a sick world.

Oh my goodness! You're back and possibly making a sequel?
Wow, I think my heart just stopped a little bit, and I can't believe that you actually said this.
As to all of the fixing of errors and rewriting a few things, I think that it is a great idea! Especially since I've done the same thing, heh.
But I do have one question as to the storyline...and it is, are you going to do the "K: Missing Kings" arc as well?
I'd sure love to see that in there too if you were planning on it! But if not, that's okay!
Anyway I'm just glad you're back in the first place, and I'm overjoyed that one of my favorite fictions on this site might come back.

you're amaZING WHAT THE HELL AND DECEM BER 5 THIS IS A RECENT FIC AMAZING I'LL KEEP A TAB OPEN SO I REMMBER TO FAVORIT ETHIS LATER. UGUH .
Tbh I really am not into this type of point of view
but idk.
i got hooked
and you helped me cry
thank you.

Good luck :D

Aaaaaahhhh Mikoto is worried!

FUCK! WHY!? FUCK! FUCKING HELL!GODDAMNIT! DAMNIT MIKOTO! FUCK! D'X

Character development ( I'm not being mean I think it's a good lesson to learn

It's all over and I am soooo saaaad! I really loved this story though, and I'm glad it was a long one! Well if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go crawl under a rock and die XD

Okay now that I can actually see to type, this was an excellent end. I am especially sad to see this end since I will miss you. HUGS!

What the heck kind of ending was that?! (I mean, sure its original but still!) QAQ

And just because the story is finished doesn't mean we have to stop chatting, I'm not that cold-hearted :)

I'll just start crying now . . .

*bits lip to hold back tears* It's coming . . .

I was super glad to see this next chapter!