AWWW DAMN! Amnesia plot? And with no conclusion? :'(( still though, thank you so much for writing this story even if you left it there. All of us can make guesses at how it ended but we will never know the true joy/pain of completing your story. Yet, I still thank you for the wild exciting ride you gave us readers. :D hope your doing well now!

HAHAHAHAHHA WOW That was a real "pleasure" to read. Never thought sex from Virgin Alistair's point of view would be so funny!

OMG The way you write is so intense! I didn't word it properly before but I deeply appreciate how MORTAL your characters are. SURVIVAL is highlighted in every escape from death. That is what makes your action scenes so intense! For example, Alistair's escape from trying to fit between bars could've cost him his lung therefore his life. AAAHH I LOVE IT!

OMG SO COLD-HEARRTED. I feel like the Elissa of before would have more reservations about this but the recent event with Alistair and her talk with Morrigan made her more cold-hearted. I also thought it unwise for Darrian to trust her as much as he did, and I was right. DAMN ELISSA :'((

OMG I LOVE YOU This story is written so well! The drama, the intrigue, the criminal exploits - I'M EATING ALL OF THIS UP! Imagining how this actually went down in DAO with the Warden going through his dungeon, I much prefer the cunning used in this version of yours. Absolutely adore this thank you!

OH MY FUCK havent finished but DID ELISSA DRINK AVERNUS' BLOOD POTION THING TO ENHANCE HERSELF? OMG GIRL

Also btw im not surprised Elissa chose to... do that with her relationship with Alistair. After learning what she probably had from Avernus, it's the most logical and least painful route. Still... :((.

Omg Solona you dumb bitch... grrr. Not to be a racist or too generalizing, but there's a reason to be CAUTIOUS of Tevinter MAGISTERS! He's not even a regular Tevinter mage but a MAGISTER. And that's a huge difference. I don't really hate her and I get the probability of making that mistake, but god. Knowing what happens in the Stolen Throne? This set up of events for that makes me want to tear my hair out. Also not too comfortable how she easily becomes herself with Aurelius but not so much to her companion friends (or at least she is more annoyed with them since she's kinda self-centered). She... reminds me of a kid, actually.

LOL Elissa is such a nerd. I love it. Interrupting Alistair's romance confession? Priceless. On more urgent news, Zevran is *still* MISSING, guys!

She's asking if he likes her back... AS A FRIEND? Or something more? ;))

On a more serious note, she clearly meant the former in this chapter but obviously her subconcious also feels the latter. Cuties! #CouslandTheirinFTW!

Oh my god.. so if she can predict things like that, will she be able to prevent worse events from happening? I get the inevitability of the Battle at Ostagar. You need it to go the way ut did because it's much easier story-wise, and you'd be making an entirely different story (AU) if things didn't go down like they were meant to. But will her ability be used in the future IN TIME? Can't wait to read more!

Oh, hon, trust me. The action scenes are PHENOMENAL. It's as heart-racing and thrilling as you can get in writing! I don't know how but it really is incredible! Two other things though:
1) THANK YOU for reminding me why I loved Daveth so much... and I hate you for making me miss him even more with your clever dialogue.
2) love Love LOVE how you write characters. CANNOT express that enough. You really studied the source material because lines from the Warden are actually used ("We have much to do and little enough time to do it.") Also Alistair's whole too reveal-y thing because he's emotional and still soft.

SO excited to read more!

AW SAD. Just started reading this story and already I am intrigued! There are so many stories like this about the game's events, but what sets yours apart is the prompt: What if the Warden DIDN'T know how to fight? That immediately makes this whole story interesting in a different way because it affects situations so much. You have me pleasantly suprised and I adore how you write - your writing per se and the way you write characters. Kudos!

So good

I love thes staroy