If you're okay with writing smut, I would like to see them consummate the relationship in the next chapter. Oh, and by the way, Birfday,

This... WAS AMAZING

This was lovely, I really like your characterizations. And it makes me really happy to see some stuff with them in the Zombie Island timeline - I think their relationship was great in that film. Well done!

I really liked this :) Zombie Island was always one of my favourite movies, so I was interested to see how you envisioned the events after the movie. I think you did a great job describing everything that was going on and how they'd got to that point.

Also, the Fraphne was superb. And incredibly cute :) I also think that you wrote the characters really well, as it really seemed like it was Daphne and Fred talking. That may sound a little strange, but what I mean is that the dialogue and interactions were so true to them that I could really picture them saying and doing those things in my mind :) Great job :)

I hope to see more from you, there seems to be a lack of Fraphne for this fandom recently. Hopefully we can fix that ;D

Keep writing!
Hayles45 :D

That was so adorable! And very well written, I might add. I hope that maybe you'd consider writing what could happen next for the best couple in all of existence. Perhaps they'd go inside and, well, ya know, do some stuff... ;) Unless of course, you're not comfortable writing anything of a sexual nature, then maybe just a romantic, sex-free night after finally knowing that they both love each other.

Thank you so much for sharing your talent and your idea with the world. It's going into my favorites, for sure. :)

Sincerely,
FraphneAddict

There are a few typos but other than that it's an adorable story :)

Lovely

i loved it, well done, great story, will there be anyone of them?