I'm amazed at how planned out you have this. Please continue soon.

Not trying to be rude but where are the chapters? How are people reviewing?

Nooooo not Zazu ;-;

Something I forgot to say about ch11:
Kopa finally realized that revenge wasn't as important as those you care about. I could plainly see it when Jehara was then taken put by the other lions who arrived at that moment; Kopa pursuing Jehara would have been unnecessary and it would have cost Kovu his life...
What a relief he made the right call...

This chapter:
I hope Kopa gets back on good terms with everyone soon. I can't wait to have him talk to Afua. Also, they got together... Wooooooo!
Kivuli should die too.
I wonder whether Siri and Afua will end up with each other or not. Hope they do.

The ones I care about are okay! :D

Wow, what a relief... Go on, Kopa, it's time to reconcile with everyone!

Die, Jehara... _

I think Kopa came to his senses at last... Hope things turn out alright. It looks like he can regain everybody's trust in due time.

Good grief, this is always so intense!

It looked like Kopa was finally starting to calm down before Mateka came... Then he argued with Afua... I really want him to reconcile with everyone...
You're right. Tumaini has taught him about forgiveness...

At least Jehara will die from the water now...

Good thing Kiara's okay, but Kopa has really gone too far...
I hope that he comes around and regains everybody elses trust in due time... It won't be easy, but I hope it will happen. Maybe realizing the consequences of his actions this time around will get his head out of the clouds.

Also, what will happen after Kopa accidentally called Vitani Zira?..

Kopa better regain his logic and fast! He's being so foolish!

Poor Mateka...

OMG Zazu!

I was worried from the very moment ypu sent them into the swamp. Kiara definitely surprised me.
It looks like the others are about to find out that Kopa has pretty much lost it sooner or later. I hope he regains his logic before he gets himself killed.

Not Zazu... :'(

Nooooo, Siri! Come back! D:

Lots of romance - related drama (with these two as well as Mateka). I wonder what she'll do next in regard of how she feels...

Wow. This certainly just got a whole lot darker. Kopa really scared me there.
Good job on also making the others notice how unlike himself he's been recently.

I don't know if I'm overreacting, but I hope Kopa won't do something bad to Kovu in order to keep him from spilling his secret.

Kopaas actions are very disturbing indeed... There's no denying that. I wonder whether he'll remember what that lioness has said to him before she dies and start to experience any feelings of guilt...

Also, are we seeing some sparks of romance here? :)

This whole part of Kopa looking like a stranger to Kiara again at the end of the chapter really fitted. You're once again reminding me of the ideas I've been thinking about for my story.

Who are these Keepers?
If Janga's so keen to find them they must be a threat to both Simba's and Malka's prides and I don't like it one bit.

Kopa has definitely been developing this darker side. That's something I haven't seen before and even planned on doing myself, though I'm not sure how I'll do it just yet.