Loved it! Great one shot :)

Live it!

I like this fanfic.

Kyaaaa!supercute! though it was alittle unclear insome places its still really good.

m,. ,

The story is great, but since it has the lyrics of AFI's "Love Like Winter", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story if you don't want to be reported one day.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator

Awwww. So Cute. Amazing fic!XD

This was such a great read, I'm glad I took the time to enjoy it!

It's a good story, i like it!