Just one joke...Oh,Jesus is a bird! It's spelled without the h,just peasant.

Dear powerrangersfangirl22,

A great story! I love how you recreate Jesus! but you might want to think about using period names. Also:

The Messiah would be a king, not a pheasant. A pheasant is a type of wild bird. A peasant is a person of low stature in a society.
Blessings in our Lord,
Agena

That's pretty...I like it :)

aww...nice. i like it.

This is good! Please continue your story, you are a wonderful writer!

Dear powerrangersfangirl:

I'm almost afraid to ask how a 1st-Century Jewish girl ends up with the name Taylor.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth