Really great characterization. Love your interpretation of moments we didn't get to enjoy : )

Such beautiful imagery with your writing style. Loving every minute of this piece. Thanks for sharing

Dang! Just found this piece and I'm really hoping you'll continue if it's not already finished. I was too captivated by your stellar writing to notice if it said "complete" or not. Wonderfully sensual and seductive. Romance is your forte! Bravo!

O-M-G! So achingly beautiful. Are you a romance writer? If not, you should be.

Hmmmm...can't wait for my husband to come home from work.
:-)

What a beautiful love poem you wrote! So transcendental, the very essence of their link.

I just ... I'm dying it's so perfect.

Your prose is so perfect I thought I was going to vomit. If you don't write more you will have to pay for my hospitalization.

Wow.. So hot and so good...awesome story

sigh Whoa, I'm totally in love with your story. Please grace me anytime with such stories as this. My poor heart is in such a state of twitter. It's gonna take me the rest of the day to calm it down. Geesh, you good.

You are such a great writer. :) Please write more!

Oh I want more. This is really good. Very atmospheric! Excited to read more?

Wow! That was deep. Very descriptive. I really enjoyed it. I would definitely love to see more.

Ooooh this is really good. Keep going!

Very descriptive. I really enjoyed. please more chapters