I'm guessing you got too busy to continue this or unfortunately lost muse/interest. I would love to see this continue. I'll bookmark this... Would love this to continue.

So, I've already read through this story once, and I LOVE it! There should be more like this, not enough stories like this.

Sweet!

The famialar must be named FLUFFY!

While I have no delusion of this ever being updated again, it was amusing while it lasted and one of the better FoZ ficlets I've read.

well... now im mad, WHY! every time i find a good fic it's DEAD!

I greatly enjoy this story and consistently reread it. One of my draws to this story is the usage of a familiar of lesser intelligence/non-human. It takes the standard FOZ style where much of the focus is on the power of the familiar and how said familiar interacts with the plot, characters, and culture of the FOZ universe, and instead puts the majority of attention onto Louise herself. This gives us the opportunity to see major character growth for herself and the surrounding cast. It also makes the familiar much more dependant on Louise for attention, training, and love; so there is a much healthier relationship both between Louise and her familiar and the familiar and the other cast members. I especially like the plot point where Siesta takes her fate in hand with her plan to become Louise's personal maid, and the much more calm relationship they have compared to canon due to the lack of a common romantic interest. I also like the author's notes which provided your picture of Onai's stats and how he will grow and develop as the story progresses. All in all, one of my favourite Familiar of Zero stories. I look forward to seeing your future writings and thank you for everything you've done so far.

LAME! WHERE'S THE FUCKING DIALOGUE!?

Death of a great story.

You are the best writer ever I’m having fun with his story so thank you

This really good

Fing LOVE IT plez continue because I love it

Really good stuff man. You ever decide to keep writing this, we'll be here to read it.

Finally somebody who seems to understand the implications that the strength of her explosions can reach, that and the familiar that you chose (and how you write that familiar) make it a wonderful story. I hope that you continue this, as it is one of the best stories that I have seen in a while. Thank you for taking the time and dedication to write this, we all appreciate it.

Need more Onai!

Though considering when the last update for this was... I'll keep my hopes up for more.