at last, Edward got his head ripped off!

Great story. Loved itThanks for sharing

It was great
I like your Bella
Thanks

Absolutely lovely. Thank you for sharing.

Amazing x

I really enjoyed this. An almost normal Caius and Volturi.

I always figured Jasper held a special affection for Bella. I think he’d gain another person with emotions he could love like he did Alice. Serenity in their emotions. Did I mention yet that I love the twins in this one? lol and Aro is hilarious.

So no death for the Cullens and god love Jasper. Even in such a tense situation he wanted to comfort and calm Bella.

I need the Cullens to show. He won’t need to kill Edward to hurt him. *evil grin* I’d also love for Jasper to learn that the bitch who turned and hurt him is gone.

I love your Jane and Alec. Man these two, they have got to sit down and talk.

He’s doing exactly as her mother mentioned first chapter. Loving her enough to let her go. I can’t blame him for Athena. Millennia are a long time to be alone.

I thought at first she might be a reincarnation but nope, just met her as a child. But I think your math is a little off. She’s 18, the picture is mentioned as her being 5, but he says it’s been a decade which is only ten years and would make her only 15. I’m so glad you made him movie Caius age and not book Caius age too. Lol.

Well that was kinda awesome. Definitely Bella too. So self sacrificing, so accepting. Bet she feels peace simply because her mate is there.

I like that you had her leave with Renee. I always thought she needed something to shake her awake. This way instead of months barely living, she was actually healing.

Great story