Is it possible by temporal displacement for Damien to 'console' Narcissa

Ooo, that's a good one. "Bah, homework," rather than ''bah, humbug!" Not very Christmassy, but probably just as well for the second task, itself, eh?

A Ladybug, and NOT a bluish Water Beetle with markings reminiscent of gaudy eyeglasses on its 'face?' Nope, no idea why that might be significant.

It's not bad but not great either. I dropped it on the 6th chapter and here are some of the flaws besides the lack of excitement or intrigue.
You ranted how useless transfigurations of beetles to buttons or matches to needles were.
Those are just practice spells, they don't have to be useful...
As far as I can tell everytime you were supposed to write "you're" you wrote "your", and I don't think you ever even actually neeeded to use "your".
First training with stunners, Neville and Ginny freaked out, Luna called it brutal...it was just a stuner.
Room of Requirement conjures anything needed, it's not just a room of lost things you can actually take out.
I don't why you are stuck on calling his followers Death Eaters, it has a horrible public image, it's not original and as far as I know he doesn't plan to lead terrorits but revolutionares with some morals.

Ha! When I read that line about combining Pokemon and beautiful women all I thought of was Sekirei! I hope you will do/have done a version of Gothic Sekirei

If you give Neville a sword he could use some training, maybe Elenia would be a good place for a summer vacation.

Hold on. This is plot contrivance like another of your stories. He just conveniently forgets rita skeeter? At least I assume it's her. Though I thought she was a water beetle. Or is that why he doesnt realize it since she has a different form in this universe?

awww poo such a shame but I can understand at forty chapters its easy to get tired of a story.

How come no marvel or star wars

Sigh. I only finished the story for the sake of finishing it. It started so well that I had high hopes for it. But then it just devolved from there. Your SI was mired with weakness, self-doubt and vacillation. As great a premise it was, the execution left much to be desired.

You had so many good ideas I would have wanted to see fleshed out: inventing, creating businesses, taking over the wizarding world. But then you make chapters such as a date with Hermione and now this marriage with her and I despair. This is not worth writing about.

I had been highly entertained thus far and then you go and do this silly fluff, and with Granger of all people. A colossal mistake.

the first is very different from other gothics great work

for what you said in the last chapter, its mainly empathy. You simply don't do to others what you don't want to be done to yourself, because you know how they'd feel. Also, i dont really get this last scene.. I'd think Damien would assume it was a scheme.

any group of people who relied on teenage boys to save them werent worth saving.
soo...basically every anime ever? bwaahahahah. Well alright not every one, but the majority, even the seinens.