So, uh...about that new story...you working on it still?

What the what the hell Nanoha? As compared to Vita, Nanoha looked really weak here. Good thing Linith managed to snatch her from death’s door or else. No more Nanoha. What you have started here is something very unique and I love how The rest of the gang, together with Linith and Precia played a role. Also, I think that Vesta is so cute! I’ve always wanted Nanoha to have a familiar.

Now you captured my attention. That is such an interesting first chapter. Is she an immportal just awakened From cernturiea of slumber or just a mere mortal. Very nice!

I really loved it.
I hope we'll see the other entries in this series in the future

Oh man that was one hell of a ride. Probably a better outcome than canon, though Scagletti looks like its going to be the cause of one hell of a mess in a few years. Who needs Vivio if he has the Mariage under his control?

great work

Loved it
I can't even put it in words
It's just awesome
Can't wait for the next installment

I feel for It I totally feel for it
I should have know when I noticed the epilogue took up 20% of the story

I should have seen the signs
Nice in name ing The next to chapters epilogue 2 and 3
Just to fool us when we look at the chapter list

The best part was I accidentally saw a spoiler on tvtropes about Nanoha getting eaten by the book
But I fell for it anyway and even forgot about the spoiler Until it happened
I'm am just amazed

This works so much better than canon
Because the illusion starts right at that moment she was grabbed she was even nocked out in the illusion for a few seconds for a justified reason
It works because the illusion doesn't try to dismiss previous events like canon did with Fate's
Nicely done

I should have also known because this story is more
Darker and edgier sci-fi
Than canon

Plus there supposed to be two more books in the series
I actually had a thought about that in the beginning of the chapter but I ignored it
if everything is solved where's the sequel hook

I actually had my fist weird thought when precia said she turned herself in
I thought it was odd

This was spectacular. Thanks Aleph!

Ow... Hit me right in the feels with Linith's death.

Her disposal of the Jewel Seeds is something I have mixed feelings on. I know I personally would never have been able to cast them aside. At the same time, it would be a disaster if they fell into the hands of the mariage. And Jail would definitely do something foolhardy with them.

Is it wrong that I think Chrono is being a pigheaded fool for how he's handling Gil, while still liking him for the same reason? I mean, he's acting Lawful Stupid in alignment, but I'm liking him specifically because he's sticking to his principles in an ugly situation.

I am glad to see the end of this. There is something nice about getting to the end of a good story. This is up there as one of the best I have read.

Season 3 with Ixpellia in Jail's arms is going to be interesting. I wonder will Nanoha and co stay with him, (continuing the trend of opposing the TSAB) or will they go on to their own bits?

Will there be notice here about when Earthscorpion has started?

Well, that's not good. I wonder what Jail has planned...

Thanks for an excellent story.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Things are messy, complicated, and sad at times, but that's life. Everyone has to move on as best they can.

Thank you very much for another great story!

amazing