Hi! Loving it so far. When is it going to be updated? Did you rewrite if so what’s it called

Love this story can't wait for Ash and Gary to be together

Oh my gosh. This is the greatest! But I gotta know what's gonna happen to the kid! Literally on the edge of my seat, but you haven't updated in a while, so I guess I'm gonna be waiting a while, huh? Oh well, take your time.

Hey cool, we have the same birthday!

But either way, great story so far. It's interesting and I can't wait to see how you work with this particular vampire theme. Everyone is different when it comes to vamps. Looking forward to more of it.

Oh my goodness I love this story! I hope you complete it because it would be a shame not to and I want to see more!

Your style of writing is wonderful and I like all of the choices of character roles and relations. I’m loving how you introduced Clemmie in the most recent chapter (and made him hot, YASSS! And gay. Double YASSS!). Love it. Bonnie grew up to be a cool chick, too. I can’t say I’m surprised xD

Not a ton to say other than I love everything you’ve done so far and I can’t wait to see where things go! Assuming they go. Please make it so! Please keep up this wonderful work! Thanks for what you’ve done so far, Borj! .

Did you have to stop at Ash. Like I really want him to know that he freakin just met Gary already! Oh, love the story by the way.

Dude I thought that he was suppose to help Gary not kill his so to be lover. So wtf?! This making very agitated!

Woah talk about awkward.

This is awesome! I want to read more! Definitely more!

I'm new to palletshipping, and let me tell you. As the first multi chapter fanfiction I have read, this has set the bar really fucking high for other stories. I hope this gets updated soon, cause I am really looking forward to more seasons.
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Episodes... And seasons... Over a year gone bye... And beautiful writing...Fuck! -_- Anyways, great story and I completely like the idea your going with here but if your going to put this much length between the episodes I really don't agree with it, it feels like your teasing us. Hopefully you'll start to update at least more than once a month considering this is one of the best FF stories I have ever read, the idea may not be that original but dialogue is more than descent with thoughts being smoothly implemented into the mix. I hope you can look at all the good reviews your getting and think about how many people your story is making happy instead of how you could do better. Your story is great but most people who scan this part of the forum are most likely turned off by the vampire idea which makes them not want to take as much of a peak. Also another good sign your story's good is when you have less reviews than favorites and follows. This means less people want you to make changes to your story yet still want you to keep writing. If you scan over certain stories with about something like 200 reviews, 125 favs, and 150 reviews I'd give it a good 85% chance that the dialogue is pulled off sourly with it containing a good 30 chapters of 'something to do when bored'.

Omg please oh please update q.q I really want to see that Palletshipping unfold.

Wow, I really LOVE this so far! One of the best FanFics I've read! Keep up the amazing work! I really hope ya update soon! :D

Ooh, I'm very intrigued by this. Reminds me a little of a Michael Crichton novel, regarding the vibes it gives me. I can't wait for more. :)

Not sure what I think of Gary and Crystal but for some reason, I've always had trouble with him being in serious relationships with female characters. Why that is I don't really know! But with that being said, I still enjoyed reading the chapter and am excited to read more! :)