Y-y-y-you do know that they're father and daughter...do you?

I liked this chapter! It sorta reminded me of (SPOILER IF YOU HAVEN'T COMPLETED BIOSHOCK INFINITE!) when Elizabeth opens the tear that killed Songbird in Rapture.. And the Little Sister with the Big Daddy! I loved that part! I hope for another new chapter soon, 'cause I've gotten attached to the story now! XD

I begane Reading you'r story and i was hooked after the first chapter i do hope you plan on keeping writing this ameazing story

some good work you've done here. really outstanding piece. I'd love to see where you take it later. I really do hope you do more work on this story

Please don't let this be the end! It might be a bit hard to believe the plot but I'm loving it! SEX SCENE, SEX SCENE!

Awww, that was cute. I hope they get married as they clearly need each other.

The story is gonna leave off there? Just as its getting good? I loved reading this story and I hope that you come back to it.

Dude, seriously? They're not gonna do the dance with no pants? I was looking forward to that!

This is sooooo cute! Thank-you for sharing!

I hope you either do another drabble or bring this one back to Columbia. It's starting to get confusing. Though that's probably a given considering that a major plot point is the ability to travel dimensions.

Great chapter!

So cute :)
Yours are the best

Drunk Elizabeth is cute.

Awwwwwww! Drunk Elizabeth is cute!

Please update this!