Bravo

just finished re-reading this story. Still absolutely love this story it is 1 of my favorite Peter and Bella stories

What a great story. I loved how you made Bella a badass and that she didn't take crap from anyone. Marrying Eric and staying with Charlie helped her grow from Edwards Bella into her own person and the loss of her family made her grow even more. I loved it.

I absolutely adore this story and am glad I found it. The only thing I didn't to point out is that in chapter 25 when Peter was explaining how he knew about the ceremony he mentions that he was punished and Aro made him work with the Volturri for five years and how he grew to be friends with Gaius and Marcus. However you contradict that chapter because Demetri and Gaius seem to not know who Peter is. aside from that this was a wonderful chapter

Bravo!

This story is really good. I never read one quite like it! Very original. I like Eric's character

I just found your story and wanted to say thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed watching Bella and Peter's relationship grow. I think you did an great job with the punishments for The Pack and the Cullens. I liked the fairness in judging the different humans and vampires and their punishment/training. Wonderful to see Esme flourish in the new environment and to be mated to Aro, same as with Jasper and Caius.

Rose,Eddie and Alice should have been dismantled and put in storage for a couple of years to start with.

So after she is finished turning will she be going back to burn Rose? please.

Starting to get a little ridiculous.

Getting a little childish...

Should not her scars start fading if she keeps changing due to the venom in her body? I would think some would be getting lighter if not going away totally?

I have to say the same thing,really? so the Mexican bitch just happened to show up at the place he hasn't. been to in decades,again really? does Bella get to kill her another vamp?

Peter sure had it rough but not as much as his sister it seems. Looks like it is ass whipping time for someone.

Looks like she is starting to except the mating. she let him Turner or wiill she slowly turn from all of the venom in her system? I wonder how long before the Volturi take notice of her? please let her kill Eddie once she is turned.I always ask that but very few honor my wish.