I'm checking this weekly for updates since April. So looking forward to the next chapter. *_*

omo she was... green with envy

thank you for continuing to write this! it’s so good!

“Be more like Elphie” - that's been her motto for a while now. The other shapes are interesting - a sluggish (useless) cow, a self-destructive mess, a monstrous burden - the imagery is as powerful as it is disturbing.

Bravo!

Oh my... I did not expect this to happen! Welp, looks like Glinda and Elphie are going to have a long talk. Amazing writing as always!

Brilliant cliffhanger, as always! Another Elphie running around would be hilarious.

Oooh wow! This was an unexpected twist!

Glad to see your story still alive and kicking! Just re-read the whole thing again to refresh my memory, and I must say it's become even more splendid! The Hellion and Brrr reveal left me reeling, holy cow, I'm anxious to read what happens next haha!

this story is amazing

happy holidays!

"Tell me who you are and why you have come all the way to my kingdom, and what can I do to make you happy?" -Roquat the Red /Ruggedo of the Rocks

Oh my. Just gonna leave this quote here totally unrelated...

Just wow. I love what you did with the Hellion and Dorothy and even though I started to guess a while ago that there has to be some connection between the two of them I did not imagine it in any way that this "merge" happens. It made me woner if this was an exception due to the Hellions Powers or if...a merge would also happen with e.g. Elphaba if the Empress dies...fantastic writing, as usually and I know I will stick with this story to the end even if it takes years to finish. Its simply quality work. :)

One more thing I wanted to share with you. A few months ago a friend of mine got into the Oz universe and finished all books available. I meet a few friends every now and then and we talk about good books we read and recommend them to each other, this is how "Oz" popped up as a topic. I then mentioned to my friends that they should check out fanfiction as well. The initial reaction was "urgs, no thats just...mature fiction". I then recommended, since we already talked about Oz, that they should check out *drumroll* your story "The Shattering of Oz" and this one to convince them otherwise. They loved it. And two weeks ago, you have to imagine that a few germans sat together in Germany and discussed your story over a sunday coffee. Yep, thats how far your story reaches. I just wanted to share this with you, maybe it makes you smile abit.

Wonderful chapter! Whatever you were, are, or may become, never stop being *you*. Beautiful point, well made.

Thank you for this story - it continues to be gripping.

It's been so long since I've read this. I've forgotten how it gets here. I shall go read it again and refresh myself.

Thank you for the update.

Is the memory haze affecting Dorothy? But how? Unless it's an ongoing, self-sustaining curse, set into the air and water of the whole world.

This story is excellent, and I've just caught up with it after three days' reading. Looking forward to the next chapter, and maybe another message from the mysterious eyes.