Reviews for Legacy
Guest chapter 17 . 7/19
It's like every bad Naruto Fan Fiction Cliche, All rolled into one story. Let's see. Non canon Civilian Council? check. Non canon angry mobs that chase Naruto? check. Power hungry "Elite" Sasuke? Check. Full on Banshee Sakura? Academy Teachers Sabotaging Naruto? Check. Fox contract? Check. And the list goes on and on.
RiceCakePlayz chapter 69 . 7/19
started reading this fic 3 days ago, and haven't slept since. I regret nothing and am thankful that you put an epilogue, most fics dont do that
Derimon2017 chapter 69 . 7/15
Great
Anon is a Terrible Name chapter 7 . 7/10
First 6 chapters are extremely underwhelming, cliche, trite and contrived. No idea how you managed to retain readership, or get 5k reviews for that matter, but looking through them, I can see a lot of fake or bought reviews. Clearly fake accounts all reviewing a bunch of chapters in one go. No wonder you got 5k reviews.
The real reviews with substance are easily identifiable and obviously not as satisfied with how... Smooth? Brainless? The plot is.
Redneravon chapter 12 . 7/7
Despite the seemingly low quality of this fic at first glance, it seems that you actually did a good job overall. Some of the details are smartly thought out, and for all the plotholes initially you did a great job at writing them out. I think this story could be even better with a beta reader. 8/10 so far.
Kuro.435 chapter 14 . 7/2
That sweet smile of Hinata that sends shivers is scary... man I loved the Jinchuriki’s scene, it will make more of a challenge to Naruto so I support it
Kuro.435 chapter 13 . 7/2
I enjoyed the romantic scene, it was simple but moving... I loved the council scene, just sad that Naruto didn’t teach Hiashi a harsher lesson
Kuro.435 chapter 12 . 7/1
The God of Shinobi defeated by 2 words, such prowess XD
Kuro.435 chapter 11 . 7/1
Kiba took the dive huh and Shino being Shino XD civilians trying to please and put Sasuke atop everyone even when evidence says otherwise, classic
Kuro.435 chapter 10 . 7/1
Well that EMS background story about Pure-bloodsHalf-bloods is very interesting and quite fitting since it’s a shock that no one ever called upon the fact the Hagoromo never got blind from his MS so it’s a quite goodclever story
Kuro.435 chapter 9 . 7/1
I like this Hinata much more than canon (but both are cute), so Kakashi probably won’t be their team leader huh? I hoped he would since, Kakashi had that older brother thing going with Naruto
Kuro.435 chapter 8 . 7/1
That last phrase though, it always crack me up XD
Kuro.435 chapter 7 . 7/1
So an AU huh? I expected that it would be mostly canon till the divergence (being Naruto more powerfulsmarter and all) but this is nice as well. At8 years old Naruto now must be even stronger than an 8 year old Itachi since the later only knew a few Katon and high-level Genjutsu aside from his almost perfect handle on Kunai and shuriken
Kuro.435 chapter 6 . 7/1
I was stunned that she kissed him back without fainting but seeing doing so, it must have been the adrenaline and when it left her body, she became aware and fainted XD
Kuro.435 chapter 5 . 7/1
Oh Naruto saving Hinata while killing the kumo ambassador, will it save Neji’s father from his fate? It was a great chapter, very interesting and captivating congratulations
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