Love your story. Please keep writing.

I read this a few days ago and I loved it! I thought it was all super awesome and cute! I hope you continue it! I really liked how... forgot his name... the lead party dude grabbed Nico and had him start a new twist to the competetition bc birds were getting antsy. I would be too after that much time!

It was a great idea to have Nico break it randomly and whoever kept up with him would win. Great idea bc if you can do stuff impromptu, only planned, then you're not as good. So that wa a great idea :)

Hope you continue it! Great job! I must say when I saw you wrote something else for Rio, I rejoiced haha Cuz I believe you were the person who said you'd be gone for a while, if not forever haha So it was a good day :)

Hope you update again soon!

I really loved this :). I've never seen Rio OR Pitch Perfect so I think it is an achievement that you've managed to get me hooked on this with out any prior knowledge or love of the films!
I know how much the ending was trying to kill you and it might have taken until the wee hours of the morning but you nailed it hun.
"Seriously though, we mention this to no one."
Perfect final line! :D
xx

Damn, I loved that you used that riff-off scene from Pitch Perfect! It was a really good idea, and even I didn't think that it could be used in a fanfic for Rio. And you should definitely write in the next chapter! I'll be watching this fanfic like a hawk. ;)

I also caught onto the Pitch Perfect thing as soon as you mentioned acapella and a riff-off. But it was seriously such a great idea! :D It was probably my favourite part out of the whole movie, just as it was my favourite part of this chapter. :)

"Seriously though, we mention this to no one." - I LOVE that line! It absolutely cracked me up! XD

This was all an awesomely written chapter, and I was honestly speechless at first, and it took me five minutes just to think up of something to say! I seriously can't pick out just a few of my favourite parts, mostly because I loved every single paragraph. Fantabulous work!

Good luck with your job interview, and I'll be waiting in extreme suspense for the next awesome chapter! :D :D