Loved your story, hope you update soon!

I really like this.

I take back what I said... Goodbye.

I would like to kiss you

your skiping so much detail... its hard to fallow. How did ace come back to life? I thought sabo found luffy in dressrosa? What happened after law had dinner with them as children? How did we reach this point? What the heck is going on? I feel like im reading the beginning of a story each chapter.

Amazing!~~~~

I read this story, and I love it so much!

Really, this was so intresting to read because the idea really hasn't been done before, and I love it!

I just reread all of this story again. Why? Because I felt like it. I love your story and everything that goes on is just too fantastic to read only once. I just graduated this year so you must be a year older then me. Just some random thing that I wanted you to know. Your story is so wonderful and amazing and I will read your next chapter when it comes out! .

Damn! I laughed like a crazy madwoman of my lifetime! This is ridiculously hilarious!

LOL! well this is interesting! XD of course the first world has Law as a king.

I think thats a well rounded group of brothers we have there.
The dark loner one,
The polite,
the protective/hot tempered,
The happy/energetic younger one, (not the right words for it, but i dont want to search Thesaurus for an hour, LOL)
and the spoiled, cowardly one.

Please update already. You have not updated in one year and four months. Please update . It is a really good story.

Update update update UPDATE PLEEEEEAAAASSSEEE!

Is this set in the real world?

I love Stellard

ooh nasty slaverly