very good hope to see the next chapter soon

Also, please update soon. The wait is killing me and everyone else, including myself is aching to read more of what happens next.

Hey, just wanted to have your permission to post and share A Dragon’s Tale in your name, on Wattpad. It’s a really great story and I feel a lot of readers there will enjoy it. If you’re worried about copyright all credit of the story will be in your name. Other than that, can’t wait for the update. Keep doing great things.

Hey i just read Scald and Soothe, how come when Spike did Asalah in the mating press, his dong didn't go all the way into her womb? Even without considering his growths spurts recently, it should be more than capable of reaching there, after all, Maria, Chrysalis and Trixie had to be careful when Spike gave it to them, after they got pregnant, because of how much he was packing below his belt, that's why he was usually very careful or he did it in their behinds...

Hello, I'd like to once again request that you give Spike two dongs...

I just read Scald and Soothe on fimfiction, and I wonder, why didn't Spike make Asalah's belly swell, when they mated and Spike came inside her, also, I'm here to once again request that you give Asalah identical male sextuplets...with each son being named after a quality of Spike's that Asalah loves...

Hmm, now that Chrysalis has revealed herself, and Spike and everyone is staring to love her for who she truly is, shouldn't that true love have start to heal all the holes in her wings, horn, legs, and body now? And also, Chrysalis is lactating, but Trixie isn't, even though Trixie got pregnant first by at least a few weeks? What's up with that? Also, Spike sticking his dong into Asalah's love tunnel after he had put it in Chrissie's bum hole is a big no-no, it's very unhygienic to say the least, he should've cleaned it first, or used something else, like his tail or finger, then cleaned that too, if he was planning to use it again...

“I think we’ll have to use protection in the future,” Trixie said, easily reading his mood. “I don’t want to pump out babies every nine months, I need a breather from it all to get back into shape or help care for the ones we already have.”

(Hmm, I know that this story is anthro, but if I remember correctly, Foals take around eleven months to be born, not nine like human...)

“I think we should take the advice of our guide, whenever they get here,” Spike said with a shrug. “They’ll know when and where to travel at this time of year. The biggest worry I have is keeping all four of you warm when we have to go up from Persia, into the realm of the Marengols.”

“Not the Marengols, themselves?”

“I can defend you from others,” Spike said with a nod. “However, I can’t be there every waking moment to protect you from the winter’s bite. Besides, we can’t share one bed for too much longer, it’s going to be getting cramped for everypony.”

(Strange, I thought Trixie and the others were actually doing things to learn how to protect themselves in case of more situations like those occurring, like learning self-defense spells and potions and such so as to prevent Spike from having to worry about them, or in case he can't get to them)

“Given how long it’s been, I wouldn't be surprised if you’d added another woman to your family by now, under more normal circumstances,” Trixie said. “As long as we got along, I’d be fine, but I’m not so sure on the others. Sharing you can be hard sometimes, you know.”

“I have love to give to all of you, no matter how many there are,” Spike replied. “I don’t want a hundred wives, and I'll equally and eternally love all that I have. Besides, as of now, I think four is more than enough for a dragon like me.”

(Yes, definitely, Spike should definitely get some more wives soon, considering the only one who he can sex with without hurting the baby is Asalah, and only because she's not pregnant yet...)

“But what if the situation arises where there are, indeed, more? The book mentioned that dragons grow to suit the sizes of their hoards,” Trixie said. “If you have any more wives, will you not grow to suit them, as well?”

“Unless you mean grow larger, I’m not entirely sure how else I would change,” he said with a shrug. “Maybe I’d get naturally stronger or something, but there’s not much else I can think of.”

The unicorn smiled as she carefully knelt in front of her husband, her hands skillfully moving up and down his thighs, as they had done many times before. “I can think of one thing...”

Seems she hadn't been unaware of his nightly trysts with Asalah after all, and was feeling a tad left out. It was time to rectify that.

(Yes, so there is hope for Spike to get two dongs to use to satisfy his wives, I bet that when it comes time for Asalah to enter her heat cycle, Spike will molt, gaining his two members which he will then use to conceive sextuplets with her, as well as satisfy the other wives, plus any new lovers he will have undoubtedly picked up along the way...)

You should've given Spike two footlongs instead of one, considering most reptiles have them, though don't make them spiny, still, other than that, pretty good...

I wonder if after ingesting the dragon bones, Spike will get stronger and even molt to where he gets two dragon dongs, with the length and size being slightly larger than his original, and a sheath made of his scales to protect his dongs and balls from damage as well as tuck them away when he's not using them, and gain the ability to compress or slightly inflate his gonads so that he can please his wives better as well as improve chances of fertilizing their eggs...

by way of proxy, the other pony's Sister? You mean Twilight, right? That would mean that Shining is her brother? so you would say brother as well, or you would call her sister-in-law, if you were referring to the other pony as Cadence...

Spike should definitely marry an ice dragon too, it'd make for an interesting contrast as well...

Maybe Asalah should also start learning about magic and potions and so on from Zecora, so she also help Spike and the others if they were in trouble...

Japan? Not Neighpon? Hm...

I bet the dragon seed that Trixie and the others keep sucking out of him would have longevity effects, among other things and would help them stay by his side until he's ready to pass on...