I enjoyed this, thank you.

Amazing work.

Beautiful! I absolutely love this. I miss the other story desperately, but even so! Bravo for your writing.

Marigold. (laughs) What else were they going to name her? That's perfect.

Just brilliant. I was constantly amused - and I think you caught their relationship perfectly.

Soooo cute! Loved this story! Your characters are always so warm and real. Great writing!

I love this story! You'd played out Hawke and Aveline's friendship very amazing!

I loved this story. So cute!

I really enjoyed this, thank you. A hilarious, touching exploration of a settled Hawke and Aveline friendship.

"The midwife, Greer, was a woman Leandra's age, with the bedside manner of a wolverine and hands that could crush ironbark."
LOL! That's so evocative. I love it!

"Which is irrelevant," pointed out her comrade, "because if a ten thousand pound murderous reptile couldn't kill you, then an eight-pound naked howler monkey sure as hell isn't."
Mwahaha! Gawd, I love your Hawke and your sense of humour :}
*applause*

That was bloody PERFECT! It's exactly how I picture their friendship and I can see the both of them acting EXACTLY like that! You truly are an amazing author. Thank you for sharing! :)

Aww that was sweet, and full of just the right amount of laughs and love ;)

Beautiful work. Well conceived (see what I did there?) and well written.