WRite RIGHT NOW or i will come to your house and knock on your door because every good fanfic i read always ends and im sick of it. PLS PLS PLS I BEG U PLS UPDATE. If not I will come to yyour house with a computer set and ideas and force u to update

lol im just kidding i wouldn't do that

This sounded interesting till the Ginny part. Harry and ginny together is stretching it in the books but an untrusting harry with ginny makes it far fetched. Ginny is way to spoiled and fame blinded.

Y’all ever going to upload again

Well i truly hope that you continue on with this brilliant story. I enjoyed reading this awesome little world that you have created. I hope that they make more friends.

AWWWWWWWWWW GO HARRY GO GINNY AWWWW THEYRE BONDED

Lol even shade has figured it out his mate XD XD GO SHADE

AHHH EVIL HARRY

MERLIN! EMRYS I LOVE MERLIN lol arthur lol clotpole lol
Greengrasses oh
YAY GO HARRY GO GINNY

Awwwww GO Harry GO ginny awww

AWWWW HE ALREADY THINKS SHES CUTE AWWW
Yikes molly

Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea

You are making this HP a Mary Sue. SUUUUUX

You also use 'merely' far to often. Synonyms of merely are: 'just' and 'only'.

Your story is good and all. But you have to have had the thought 'Do ten-year-old have such complex thought?' Because I know that ten-year-olds usually do not have a single complex thought in their minds. I'm not trying to be rude it is just the way it is.

Yours in Eternity,
Cody Hanna

PLEASE UPDATE I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY AND ICWANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!